2015年12月·第3套英语四级写作 · 题目、范文与解析
本页是 2015年12月英语四级真题第3套 写作 的写作真题页（四六级短文写作）—— 与试卷排版同一卷面：完整写作要求（Directions，词数要求 120–180 词）连续排印 ，卷面下方直接给出参考范文（159 词）与整篇中译、逐段拆解，另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。
写作题和范文
本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2015年12月·第3套 英语四级写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面：完整写作要求（Directions，含主题、文体、词数与署名约束）连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题；卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。
【参考范文 · 159 词】写作无唯一标准答案，以下为达标示范
The saying "Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make things happen" urges us to be active creators of our own lives rather than passive bystanders. In my view, this attitude is exactly what turns dreams into reality, and I firmly stand with those who choose to make things happen.
Those who merely stand by and watch often let precious opportunities slip away. Take Jack Ma as an example. When most people were still doubting the Internet, he took the initiative to start Alibaba, seizing the chance that others were only observing. Had he chosen to be a mere onlooker, China's e-commerce might never have flourished as it does today. His story shows that only by stepping forward and acting can we shape the outcome.
Therefore, we should never wait on the sidelines for good things to appear. Instead, let us take the initiative, seize every opportunity, and become participants who make things happen.
【参考译文】
“别只是走出去看会发生什么，要走出去让事情发生”这句话告诫我们，要做自己人生的主动创造者，而不是被动的旁观者。在我看来，正是这种态度把梦想变为现实，我坚定地站在那些选择主动出击的人一边。
只是站在一旁观望的人，往往任由宝贵的机会溜走。以马云为例。当大多数人还在怀疑互联网时，他率先行动、创办了阿里巴巴，抓住了别人只在旁观的机会。倘若他当初选择做一个旁观者，中国的电子商务或许永远无法发展到今天这般繁荣。他的故事说明，唯有挺身向前、付诸行动，我们才能塑造结局。
因此，我们绝不应坐在场边等着好事降临。相反，让我们主动出击、抓住每一个机会，成为那些让事情发生的参与者。
【第 1 段】释义加表态落地。首段用 "urges us to be active creators of our own lives rather than passive bystanders" 把格言转述成自己的对比表达，避免逐字抄原句；再用 "In my view... I firmly stand with those who choose to make things happen" 一句钉死立场，落实了第一段‘释义加亮态度’的功能。
【第 2 段】主题句加实例落地。主题句 "Those who merely stand by and watch often let precious opportunities slip away" 亮分论点；"Take Jack Ma as an example... took the initiative to start Alibaba" 提供具体事例；"Had he chosen to be a mere onlooker..." 用虚拟语气让步反证；末句 "only by stepping forward and acting can we shape the outcome" 回扣中心，四步齐全。
【第 3 段】警示加号召落地。"we should never wait on the sidelines" 反面警示，"let us take the initiative, seize every opportunity, and become participants who make things happen" 正面号召并呼应格言，落实第三段‘升华回扣’的功能。
这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么
动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ，再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断，不是通用套路。
评论格言并主张做参与者
任务动词是写一篇 an essay commenting on the saying，对象是这句格言——把 go out there to see what happens（旁观、被动等待）和 go out there to make things happen（主动创造）作对比。要求还点明可以 cite examples to illustrate the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers in life。所以本篇要做的是：亮明‘做参与者而非旁观者’的立场，并用事例论证它为什么重要，不是复述或翻译原句。
面向阅卷人的正式议论
本题是纯议论大作文，没有具体收信人，读者就是阅卷老师。用正式书面语即可：第一人称表态度可以（如 In my view），但不写口语缩略乱侃、不写称呼落款。语域定位为‘规范、克制、有论证感’。
主动出击者才能改变结果
中心论点：人生应当做 make things happen 的参与者，而不是坐等 see what happens 的旁观者——只有主动出击、抓住机会，才能真正改变结果、成就自己。
- 旁观者错失机会 第一层：只做 mere onlookers、站在一旁观望的人，往往任由机会溜走，一事无成。这是从反面说明被动等待的代价。
- 参与者主动创造成果 第二层：主动参与者敢于率先行动、抓住别人还在观望的机会，从而把局面改写。用一个具体事例（如企业家在别人怀疑时率先创业）落实，正面证明主动的价值。
怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架
按写作家族给出现成的段落框架（每段承担什么功能），并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架（留出填本题内容的空位）。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。
- 第 1 段 释义加亮立场 用自己的话解释格言在讲 make things happen 优于 see what happens，并明确表态支持做参与者。
- 第 2 段 举例论证主动价值 主题句亮出‘主动才能改变结果’，配一个具体事例展开，再一句让步反证，收一句回扣中心。
- 第 3 段 升华呼吁 重申不做旁观者的态度，发出行动号召，呼应格言收尾。
内容落点：把格言解读为‘要做 make things happen 的主动创造者，而非坐等 see what happens 的被动旁观者’，然后明确表态——我坚定站在主动参与这一边。
- 转述格言 The saying "___" urges us to be active creators of our own lives rather than passive bystanders.（引号里填格言，后半句用自己的对比表达替换原句）
- 亮明观点 In my view, this attitude is exactly what ___, and I firmly stand with those who choose to ___.（填‘它带来什么价值’与‘你支持的做法’）
内容落点：先说只做 mere onlookers 的人错失机会；再举一个在别人观望时率先行动、抓住机会的具体人物（如企业家率先创业），说明正是主动出击改变了结果；末句点出‘唯有向前行动才能塑造结局’。
- 举例过渡 Take ___ as an example. When most people were still ___, he/she took the initiative to ___.（填人物、当时的观望状态、其主动之举）
- 让步反证 Had he/she chosen to be a mere onlooker, ___ might never have ___.（用虚拟语气反推：若选择旁观，好结果就不会发生）
- 小结回扣 His/Her story shows that only by ___ can we ___.（填‘主动行动’与‘改变结果’，把例子拉回中心）
内容落点：重申不做旁观者，号召大家主动出击、抓住每一个机会，成为 make things happen 的参与者，收尾呼应格言。
- 反面警示 Therefore, we should never ___ for good things to appear.（填被动等待的行为，如坐在场边观望）
- 结尾号召 Instead, let us ___, and become participants who ___.（填主动做法与要达成的结果，呼应格言）
本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分
按阅卷四维（内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式）给出本题达标要点，并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。
- 内容切题 必须评论加举例 本题达标要点：既要评论格言、亮出做参与者的立场，又要按 cite examples 给出具体事例。最易失分处是只翻译复述格言、通篇无实例。
- 结构连贯 立场首尾贯穿 本题要让‘做参与者而非旁观者’的态度从首段贯穿到尾段，靠 rather than / mere onlooker / take the initiative 等对比词串起来，避免立场摇摆。
- 语言准确 备好主动被动对比词 本题准备好 take the initiative、seize opportunities、mere onlooker、stand by and watch 这组主动/被动对比表达；Had he chosen... 的虚拟语气要写对，别写成 If he chosen。
- 字数格式 卡在上下限之间 本题硬性要求 at least 120 words but no more than 180 words，写不够或大幅超标都失分，控制在区间内即可，不必逼近上限。
- 通篇复述格言 反面示例：The saying means we should not just see what happens but make things happen. It tells us to make things happen, not only see what happens.（把原句翻来覆去重说）。修正：一句释义后立刻表态并展开——In my view, only those who take the initiative can change their fate, as the following example shows.
- 空喊无实例 反面示例：Being a participant is very important. Everyone should be active. If we are active, we will succeed.（三句都是口号、无一例）。修正：Take Jack Ma as an example. When others doubted the Internet, he took the initiative to build Alibaba and changed China's e-commerce.
- 重复凑字 反面示例：We should make things happen. Making things happen is good. To make things happen is what we need to do to make things happen.（同义反复凑字）。修正：删去重复，改成推进论证的一句——Only by acting first can we seize the chance before it disappears.
常见问题
围绕本题的写作题目与要求、作文类型、立意要点、参考范文、谋篇分段与评分丢分，逐条给出可核对的答案。
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- 按内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式四维评分，本题达标要点：内容切题——本题达标要点：既要评论格言、亮出做参与者的立场，又要按 cite examples 给出具体事例。最易失分处是只翻译复述格言、通篇无实例；结构连贯——本题要让‘做参与者而非旁观者’的态度从首段贯穿到尾段，靠 rather than / mere onlooker / take the initiative 等对比词串起来，避免立场摇摆；语言准确——本题准备好 take the initiative、seize opportunities、mere onlooker、stand by and watch 这组主动/被动对比表达；Had he chosen... 的虚拟语气要写对，别写成 If he chosen；字数格式——本题硬性要求 at least 120 words but no more than 180 words，写不够或大幅超标都失分，控制在区间内即可，不必逼近上限。 典型低分写法（须避免）：反面示例：The saying means we should not just see what happens but make things happen. It tells us to make things happen, not only see what happens.（把原句翻来覆去重说）。修正：一句释义后立刻表态并展开——In my view, only those who take the initiative can change their fate, as the following example shows；反面示例：Being a participant is very important. Everyone should be active. If we are active, we will succeed.（三句都是口号、无一例）。修正：Take Jack Ma as an example. When others doubted the Internet, he took the initiative to build Alibaba and changed China's e-commerce；反面示例：We should make things happen. Making things happen is good. To make things happen is what we need to do to make things happen.（同义反复凑字）。修正：删去重复，改成推进论证的一句——Only by acting first can we seize the chance before it disappears。