2018年6月·第3套英语四级写作 · 题目、范文与解析
本页是 2018年6月英语四级真题第3套 写作 的写作真题页(四六级短文写作)—— 与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,词数要求 120–180 词)连续排印 ,卷面下方直接给出参考范文(133 词)与整篇中译、逐段拆解,另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。
写作题和范文
本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2018年6月·第3套 英语四级写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,含主题、文体、词数与署名约束)连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题;卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。
【参考范文 · 133 词】写作无唯一标准答案,以下为达标示范
The ability to speak clearly and confidently is one of the most valuable skills a person can possess, and developing it deserves our serious attention.
Good speaking ability matters for several reasons. In a job interview, for instance, the candidate who expresses ideas fluently often wins the offer, while a nervous, silent applicant is easily overlooked. In class, students who dare to speak up gain more chances to show their talent. As for how to develop it, the key is constant practice. We can join an English corner and talk with others every week. What is more, imitating native speakers by reading news aloud helps improve our pronunciation and rhythm.
In short, speaking ability opens doors to success, and only through daily practice and the courage to open our mouths can we truly master it.
【参考译文】
清楚而自信地说话,是一个人所能拥有的最有价值的技能之一,而培养这种能力值得我们认真对待。
良好的口语能力之所以重要,有几个原因。比如在求职面试中,能流利表达想法的应聘者往往拿到录用通知,而紧张、说不出话的人则很容易被忽略。在课堂上,敢于开口发言的学生能获得更多展示才华的机会。至于如何培养它,关键在于持续练习。我们可以参加英语角,每周和别人交流。此外,模仿母语者、大声朗读新闻,有助于改善我们的发音和语流节奏。
总之,口语能力为成功打开大门,唯有靠日常练习和敢于开口的勇气,我们才能真正掌握它。
【第 1 段】一句定性一句表态。首段用"The ability to speak clearly and confidently is one of the most valuable skills"一句定性亮观点,再用"developing it deserves our serious attention"半句表态,落实了"首段点题亮立场",两个任务点开头即到位。
【第 2 段】先例证后转方法。本段先用"for several reasons"立观点句,再以"In a job interview, for instance"和课堂发言两个场景坐实重要性;随后用"As for how to develop it"明显转向,配 "What is more" 递进给出两条方法,完整兑现"理由加例子再给方法"、覆盖两个任务点。
【第 3 段】重申加倒装升华。尾段以"In short"收束,把立场换说法重申为"speaking ability opens doors to success",再用"only through... can we truly master it"的部分倒装拔高,落实"尾段回扣升华"、首尾呼应。
这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么
动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ,再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断,不是通用套路。
写短文谈口语能力的重要性并给出培养方法
任务动词是 write,宾语是 a short essay on the importance of speaking ability and how to develop it。它其实藏着两个并列任务点:一是论证口语能力"为什么重要",二是回答"怎么培养"它,二者缺一不可——只写一半就直接判为要点不全、内容分大扣。
面向阅卷人的正式议论文
要求写的是 a short essay(议论短文),没有具体收信人,也就不需要称呼语、结尾问候语或署名;写作身份是一名参加四级考试的学生,面向阅卷老师,用正式书面语,避免 gonna、wanna 这类口语缩略和网络用语即可。
口语能力至关重要且可靠练习培养
全篇立场一句话钉死:口语能力是当今社会一项极有价值的技能,而它完全可以通过持续的、有针对性的练习培养出来。这一句同时罩住 the importance of speaking ability and how to develop it 两个任务点,开头点出、结尾重申。
- 重要性·求职场景 在求职面试中,能流利清楚表达想法的人往往拿到 offer,而紧张说不出话的应聘者容易被忽略——用一个具体场景把"重要"落到实处。
- 重要性·学业场景 在课堂上,敢开口发言、做展示的学生能获得更多展示才华、被老师认可的机会,说明口语能力直接影响学业表现。
- 方法·坚持开口练习 培养的关键是持续练习:定期参加英语角,每周主动和别人用英语交流,把开口变成习惯。
- 方法·模仿跟读朗读 模仿母语者、大声朗读新闻等材料,改善发音和语流节奏,让开口练习有可依托的范本。
怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架
按写作家族给出现成的段落框架(每段承担什么功能),并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架(留出填本题内容的空位)。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。
- 第 1 段 点题+亮立场 开门见山指出口语能力是极有价值的技能、值得认真对待,一句话罩住 the importance of speaking ability and how to develop it 两个任务点,定下全篇立场。
- 第 2 段 论证重要性+给方法 先用求职、课堂两个场景+例子论证"为何重要",再转入"如何培养",给出坚持开口练习、模仿跟读两条可操作方法,是全篇的论证主体。
- 第 3 段 总结+升华 简短重申口语能力通向成功、唯有日常练习和敢于开口才能真正掌握,收束全文、呼应开头立场。
落点:清楚自信地说话是一个人最有价值的技能之一,而培养这项能力值得我们认真对待——一句话同时点出 the importance of speaking ability and how to develop it 里"重要性"与"培养"两个方向。
- 定性亮观点 The ability to __ is one of the most valuable skills a person can possess.(把 __ 换成本题的"清楚自信地说话")
- 补一句表态 ..., and __ deserves our serious attention.(__ 填"培养它 developing it",一句话把第二个任务点也带出来)
落点:重要性用求职面试(能流利表达者拿 offer、说不出话者被忽略)和课堂发言(敢开口者获更多机会)两个场景坐实;方法给"参加英语角每周开口交流"和"模仿母语者、大声朗读新闻"两条,正好回应 how to develop it。
- 引出理由 __ matters for several reasons.(__ 填本题主语"Good speaking ability",先立观点句再展开)
- 举例过渡 In __, for instance, __.(前一空填场景如"a job interview",后一空填该场景里的具体例子)
- 转入方法 As for how to __, the key is __.(前空填"develop it",后空填核心方法,明显切换到"怎么做")
- 递进补一条 What is more, __.(再加一条方法或理由,避免只堆一条显得单薄)
落点:口语能力为成功打开大门,唯有日常练习和敢于开口才能真正掌握它——一句话把"重要性"和"培养方法"两条线同时收口,呼应开头立场。
- 总结起头 In short, __.(__ 填对中心的重新表述,如"口语能力为成功打开大门")
- 升华强调 ..., and only through __ can we __.(用 only 引起的部分倒装点出"唯有…才能…",__ 填方法与目标,收束有力)
本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分
按阅卷四维(内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式)给出本题达标要点,并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。
- 内容切题 两任务点齐全且具体 本题达标线是 the importance of speaking ability and how to develop it 两点都写、且都用场景/方法坐实;最易失分处是只顾写重要性、忘了给培养方法(或反之),导致要点残缺直接扣内容分。
- 结构连贯 三段清晰逻辑连词到位 本题达标要点是三段分明、"重要性→方法→总结"逻辑链靠 for instance、As for how to develop it、What is more、In short 串起来;易失分处是通篇一段到底或句子干摆、缺衔接词,读起来像罗列。
- 语言准确 简单句写对优先于炫技 本题达标不靠难句,靠 the candidate who expresses ideas fluently、only through... can we... 这类结构正确的句子;易失分处是硬凑长难句导致主谓、时态出错,或中式直译搭配(如把"提高口语"写成 improve my mouth)。
- 字数格式 落在区间且不加书信格式 本题要求 write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words,且是 a short essay 不是书信;达标要点是词数落区间、纯议论段落格式;易失分处是不足或注水超限,或错误地加了 Dear.../Yours 之类书信元素。
- 只喊重要不举例 反面示例:Speaking ability is very very important. It is important for everyone. We must learn it well because it is so useful.(三句都在空喊"重要",没有任何场景和方法。)改成:In a job interview, the candidate who speaks fluently often wins the offer, while a silent one is overlooked.(用求职场景把"重要"坐实。)
- 方法罗列不展开 反面示例:We can read books, watch movies, listen to songs, recite words, make friends, use apps and travel.(一口气堆七条,全是名词短语、无一展开。)改成:We can join an English corner and talk with others every week; what is more, imitating native speakers by reading news aloud improves our pronunciation.(留两条并各自展开。)
- 逐字直译搭配错 反面示例:I want to improve my mouth English and open my mouth to say English every day.("练口语""开口说"被逐字直译,搭配全错。)改成:I want to improve my spoken English and speak English aloud every day.(换成地道搭配。)
常见问题
围绕本题的写作题目与要求、作文类型、立意要点、参考范文、谋篇分段与评分丢分,逐条给出可核对的答案。
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- 2018年6月英语四级真题第3套 写作的中心立意是全篇立场一句话钉死:口语能力是当今社会一项极有价值的技能,而它完全可以通过持续的、有针对性的练习培养出来。这一句同时罩住 the importance of speaking ability and how to develop it 两个任务点,开头点出、结尾重申。可展开的要点:在求职面试中,能流利清楚表达想法的人往往拿到 offer,而紧张说不出话的应聘者容易被忽略——用一个具体场景把"重要"落到实处;在课堂上,敢开口发言、做展示的学生能获得更多展示才华、被老师认可的机会,说明口语能力直接影响学业表现;培养的关键是持续练习:定期参加英语角,每周主动和别人用英语交流,把开口变成习惯;模仿母语者、大声朗读新闻等材料,改善发音和语流节奏,让开口练习有可依托的范本。
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- 2018年6月英语四级真题第3套 写作的参考范文(133 词):The ability to speak clearly and confidently is one of the most valuable skills a person can possess, and developing it deserves our serious attention. Good speaking ability matters for several reasons. In a job interview, for instance, the candidate who expresses ideas fluently often wins the offer, while a nervous, silent applicant is easily overlooked. In class, students who dare to speak up gain more chances to show their talent. As for how to develop it, the key is constant practice. We can join an English corner and talk with others every week. What is more, imitating native speakers by reading news aloud helps improve our pronunciation and rhythm. In short, speaking ability opens doors to success, and only through daily practice and the courage to open our mouths can we truly master it.
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- 按内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式四维评分,本题达标要点:内容切题——本题达标线是 the importance of speaking ability and how to develop it 两点都写、且都用场景/方法坐实;最易失分处是只顾写重要性、忘了给培养方法(或反之),导致要点残缺直接扣内容分;结构连贯——本题达标要点是三段分明、"重要性→方法→总结"逻辑链靠 for instance、As for how to develop it、What is more、In short 串起来;易失分处是通篇一段到底或句子干摆、缺衔接词,读起来像罗列;语言准确——本题达标不靠难句,靠 the candidate who expresses ideas fluently、only through... can we... 这类结构正确的句子;易失分处是硬凑长难句导致主谓、时态出错,或中式直译搭配(如把"提高口语"写成 improve my mouth);字数格式——本题要求 write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words,且是 a short essay 不是书信;达标要点是词数落区间、纯议论段落格式;易失分处是不足或注水超限,或错误地加了 Dear.../Yours 之类书信元素。 典型低分写法(须避免):反面示例:Speaking ability is very very important. It is important for everyone. We must learn it well because it is so useful.(三句都在空喊"重要",没有任何场景和方法。)改成:In a job interview, the candidate who speaks fluently often wins the offer, while a silent one is overlooked.(用求职场景把"重要"坐实。);反面示例:We can read books, watch movies, listen to songs, recite words, make friends, use apps and travel.(一口气堆七条,全是名词短语、无一展开。)改成:We can join an English corner and talk with others every week; what is more, imitating native speakers by reading news aloud improves our pronunciation.(留两条并各自展开。);反面示例:I want to improve my mouth English and open my mouth to say English every day.("练口语""开口说"被逐字直译,搭配全错。)改成:I want to improve my spoken English and speak English aloud every day.(换成地道搭配。)。