2026年6月·第3套英语四级写作 · 题目、范文与解析
本页是 2026年6月英语四级真题第3套 写作 的写作真题页(四六级短文写作)—— 与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,词数要求 120–180 词)连续排印 ,卷面下方直接给出参考范文(121 词)与整篇中译、逐段拆解,另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。
写作题和范文
本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2026年6月·第3套 英语四级写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,含主题、文体、词数与署名约束)连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题;卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。
【参考范文 · 121 词】写作无唯一标准答案,以下为达标示范
I am honored to submit a proposal on how to make students' campus life easier. As daily routines grow more demanding, small improvements in campus services can save students considerable time and energy.
First, the university could develop a one-stop mobile app that integrates course schedules, room bookings, and exam arrangements. This would spare students the trouble of switching between multiple platforms. Second, extending library opening hours and adding more self-study spaces during examination periods would reduce overcrowding. Third, improving shuttle-bus frequency between teaching buildings and dormitories would make commuting less stressful.
These practical measures, if implemented, would significantly ease students' daily pressures. I sincerely hope the university will consider this proposal and take steps toward a more convenient campus life.
【参考译文】
我很荣幸提交一份关于如何让学生校园生活更轻松的提案。随着日常安排日益紧张,校园服务上的细微改进就能为学生节省大量时间和精力。
首先,学校可以开发一款一站式手机应用,整合课程表、教室预约和考试安排,这样学生就不必在多个平台之间切换。其次,延长图书馆开放时间并在考试季增加自习空间,可缓解拥挤。第三,增加教学楼与宿舍之间的班车频次,会让通勤更轻松。
这些切实可行的措施若能落实,将显著减轻学生的日常压力。我真诚地希望学校考虑这份提案,并采取措施让校园生活更加便利。
【第 1 段】落实首段功能:点明身份、目的与背景。首句 I am honored to submit a proposal on... 直接回应 put forward a proposal to the university on how to make students' campus life easier,点明受邀者身份与提案主题;第二句用 Small improvements... can save... 为背景铺垫,避免开头冗长。
【第 2 段】主体段三条建议均具体可操作。First... Second... Third... 分别给出APP整合、学习空间、校园交通三项措施,每项都紧跟一句理由,扣住 easier 这一核心。
【第 3 段】结尾总结并礼貌呼吁。These practical measures, if implemented... 总结价值,I sincerely hope... 礼貌呼吁学校考虑,未引入新内容,收束自然。
这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么
动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ,再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断,不是通用套路。
向大学提'让校园生活更轻松'的正式提案
本题核心写作任务是 put forward a proposal to the university on how to make students' campus life easier,即以受邀者身份向学校提交一份关于如何让学生校园生活更便利的正式建议。
正式书面语,面向大学管理层
写作对象是 university,写作者身份是受邀提出建议的人;从 write an essay to make your proposal 可见这是一篇正式短文,应使用礼貌、建设性的书面表达,避免命令式或对同学聊天的口吻。
学校可从数字化服务、学习空间与校园交通三方面入手
本篇中心是:大学应通过整合线上服务、优化学习空间安排和改善校内交通,切实让学生的校园生活更便利。
- 一站式线上服务平台 开发或整合校园APP,把课表、教室预约、考试安排、成绩查询等功能集中,减少学生在多个系统间切换的麻烦。
- 优化学习空间供给 延长图书馆开放时间、增加考试季自习座位,缓解找座位难、排队长的日常痛点。
- 改善校内交通接驳 增加教学楼与宿舍区之间的班车频次或优化线路,让通勤更省时省力。
怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架
按写作家族给出现成的段落框架(每段承担什么功能),并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架(留出填本题内容的空位)。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。
- 第 1 段 引言:说明提案背景与目的 以受邀者身份点明写作目的,简要说明为何要让校园生活更轻松。
- 第 2 段 主体:提出2-3点具体建议并给出理由 逐条给出可操作措施,每点附带一句理由或例子。
- 第 3 段 结尾:总结并呼吁学校考虑 重申建议价值,以礼貌、建设性的方式结束全文。
以礼貌语气说明写作目的:回应邀请,就 how to make students' campus life easier 向学校提出建议,并用一句概括性背景说明这些改进的意义。
- 点明写作目的 I am honored to submit a proposal on...
- 说明改进意义 Small improvements in ... can save students considerable time and energy.
分别写:一站式APP整合信息、延长图书馆与增加自习空间、增加班车频次或优化线路,每点都说明如何让日常事务更便利。
- 引出第一条建议 First, the university could develop...
- 说明理由/效果 This would spare students the trouble of...
- 引出后续建议 Second, ...; Third, ...
强调这些措施若能实施将显著便利学生生活,并表达希望学校考虑的愿望。
- 总结建议价值 These practical measures, if implemented, would...
- 礼貌呼吁 I sincerely hope the university will consider...
本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分
按阅卷四维(内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式)给出本题达标要点,并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。
- 内容切题 必须围绕'easier'给出具体建议 本题关键词是 make students' campus life easier,建议必须落在'让校园生活更便利'上,不能写成抱怨文,也不能滑到'丰富生活'或'缓解压力'。
- 结构连贯 三段式提案结构 本篇采用'引言→建议+理由→总结呼吁'结构,段内衔接词使建议条理清楚。
- 语言准确 使用正式建议句型 文中使用 I am honored to submit..., the university could develop..., I sincerely hope... 等礼貌、正式句型,符合向学校提建议的语域。
- 字数格式 控制在规定词数区间,三段分明 本文词数符合 at least 120 words but not more than 180 words 的要求,且分为三段,结构清晰。
- 抱怨文示例 反面示例:Campus life is too hard. The library is always crowded and the cafeteria is noisy. I feel stressed every day. 修正:To make campus life easier, the university could extend library hours and add more self-study rooms, which would reduce overcrowding during peak times.
- 空泛建议示例 反面示例:The university should build a better campus and improve all facilities. 修正:The university could develop a one-stop app that combines course schedules, room bookings, and exam results, saving students from switching between platforms.
- 语气错位示例 反面示例:You must give us more buses and open the library longer. 修正:I propose that the university increase shuttle-bus frequency and extend library opening hours to make daily commuting and studying more convenient.
- 开头冗长示例 反面示例:Nowadays, with the rapid development of society and technology, university students face more and more challenges in their daily life, so I think it is very important for us to make campus life easier...(开头过长)修正:I am honored to submit a proposal on how to make students' campus life easier. Small improvements in campus services can save students considerable time and energy.
常见问题
围绕本题的写作题目与要求、作文类型、立意要点、参考范文、谋篇分段与评分丢分,逐条给出可核对的答案。
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- 2026年6月英语四级真题第3套 写作的参考范文(121 词):I am honored to submit a proposal on how to make students' campus life easier. As daily routines grow more demanding, small improvements in campus services can save students considerable time and energy. First, the university could develop a one-stop mobile app that integrates course schedules, room bookings, and exam arrangements. This would spare students the trouble of switching between multiple platforms. Second, extending library opening hours and adding more self-study spaces during examination periods would reduce overcrowding. Third, improving shuttle-bus frequency between teaching buildings and dormitories would make commuting less stressful. These practical measures, if implemented, would significantly ease students' daily pressures. I sincerely hope the university will consider this proposal and take steps toward a more convenient campus life.
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- 按内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式四维评分,本题达标要点:内容切题——本题关键词是 make students' campus life easier,建议必须落在'让校园生活更便利'上,不能写成抱怨文,也不能滑到'丰富生活'或'缓解压力';结构连贯——本篇采用'引言→建议+理由→总结呼吁'结构,段内衔接词使建议条理清楚;语言准确——文中使用 I am honored to submit..., the university could develop..., I sincerely hope... 等礼貌、正式句型,符合向学校提建议的语域;字数格式——本文词数符合 at least 120 words but not more than 180 words 的要求,且分为三段,结构清晰。 典型低分写法(须避免):反面示例:Campus life is too hard. The library is always crowded and the cafeteria is noisy. I feel stressed every day. 修正:To make campus life easier, the university could extend library hours and add more self-study rooms, which would reduce overcrowding during peak times;反面示例:The university should build a better campus and improve all facilities. 修正:The university could develop a one-stop app that combines course schedules, room bookings, and exam results, saving students from switching between platforms;反面示例:You must give us more buses and open the library longer. 修正:I propose that the university increase shuttle-bus frequency and extend library opening hours to make daily commuting and studying more convenient;反面示例:Nowadays, with the rapid development of society and technology, university students face more and more challenges in their daily life, so I think it is very important for us to make campus life easier...(开头过长)修正:I am honored to submit a proposal on how to make students' campus life easier. Small improvements in campus services can save students considerable time and energy。