2020年9月·第2套英语六级写作 · 题目、范文与解析
本页是 2020年9月英语六级真题第2套 写作 的写作真题页（四六级短文写作）—— 与试卷排版同一卷面：完整写作要求（Directions，词数要求 150–200 词）连续排印 ，卷面下方直接给出参考范文（189 词）与整篇中译、逐段拆解，另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。
写作题和范文
本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2020年9月·第2套 英语六级写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面：完整写作要求（Directions，含主题、文体、词数与署名约束）连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题；卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。
【参考范文 · 189 词】写作无唯一标准答案，以下为达标示范
The proverb "What is worth doing is worth doing well" carries a simple yet profound message: once we decide that something is worth our effort, we should pursue excellence rather than settle for a careless, half-finished job. I firmly agree with this view.
To begin with, doing things well is the surest path to personal growth. When a student is devoted to a task and strives for perfection, every detail he polishes sharpens his own ability. Take my roommate, who rewrote his graduation thesis five times; the effort not only earned him an honour but also trained the patience he now relies on at work.
Furthermore, the spirit of doing well drives society forward. Great engineers and craftsmen who spare no effort to refine their products give us the reliable bridges, phones and medicines we depend on every day. Had they been content with a rough result, progress would slow and quality would collapse.
In conclusion, whatever is worth our time deserves our very best. As young students, we should abandon the get-it-done-quickly attitude and devote ourselves to every task, big or small, until it is truly done well.
【参考译文】
“值得做的事就值得做好”这句格言传递着一个简单却深刻的道理：一旦我们认定某件事值得投入，就应当追求卓越，而不是敷衍了事、半途而废。我完全赞同这一观点。
首先，把事情做好是个人成长最可靠的途径。当一个学生全身心投入一项任务、力求完美时，他打磨的每一个细节都在磨练自己的能力。就拿我的室友来说，他把毕业论文重写了五遍；这份努力不仅为他赢得了荣誉，也磨练出他如今在工作中所倚重的耐心。
其次，精益求精的精神推动社会前进。那些不遗余力打磨产品的杰出工程师和工匠，为我们带来了每天赖以依靠的可靠桥梁、手机与药品。倘若他们满足于粗糙的结果，进步就会放缓，质量也会崩塌。
总之，凡是值得我们投入时间的事，都值得我们全力以赴。作为青年学生，我们应当摒弃‘草草了事’的心态，全身心投入每一件事，无论大小，直到真正把它做好。
【第 1 段】释义加表态起笔。用 "carries a simple yet profound message" 把格言含义讲透，点出落点是 pursue excellence rather than settle for a careless job；再以 "I firmly agree with this view" 一句亮明立场，落实了第一段‘释义并亮明立场’的功能。
【第 2 段】主题句加室友事例。"To begin with, doing things well is the surest path to personal growth" 是主题句，随后用室友重写论文五遍的具体事例支撑，套用了‘论点句加个人事例’的四步结构。
【第 3 段】换社会角度加反面假设。"Furthermore" 递进换到社会角度，用工程师、工匠 spare no effort 的事例，并以 "Had they been content with a rough result" 的反面假设收紧，落实了‘论点句加社会事例’。
【第 4 段】呼应格言落到学生。"In conclusion, whatever is worth our time deserves our very best" 呼应格言、总收全文，再以 "As young students, we should abandon the get-it-done-quickly attitude" 落到自身态度，做到首尾呼应。
这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么
动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ，再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断，不是通用套路。
赞同并论证这句格言
本题要求 write an essay on the saying，评论对象是 What is worth doing is worth doing well。任务不是讲故事、也不是单纯翻译，而是‘评论+表态’：用一两句把格言含义讲透（核心是‘做就要做好、精益求精’，而不是‘要不要去做’），亮明你赞同的立场，再用理由和事例把立场撑起来。
面向阅卷人的正式书面语
本题是纯议论大作文，没有具体收信人，因此不用称呼、不用署名，通篇用面向阅卷人的正式书面语即可：多用完整长句、正式词汇（如 pursue excellence、be devoted to），避免 gonna、a lot of 这类口语，也不要出现‘I think I think’式的随意重复。
凡值得做的事都应追求做好
中心论点：我完全赞同 What is worth doing is worth doing well —— 一旦认定一件事值得投入，就该追求卓越、精益求精，而不是敷衍了事。注意落点是‘做好’，不是‘做不做’。
- 做好成就个人成长 分论点一（对个人）：把每件值得做的事做到位，是磨练能力、积累底气最可靠的途径。可配学习/写论文这类考生熟悉的事例。
- 精益求精推动社会进步 分论点二（对社会）：工程师、工匠对产品 spare no effort 的打磨，才有可靠的桥梁、手机、药品，社会因此进步。用工匠精神类事例。
怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架
按写作家族给出现成的段落框架（每段承担什么功能），并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架（留出填本题内容的空位）。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。
- 第 1 段 释义并亮明立场 用一两句解释 What is worth doing is worth doing well 的含义（重点在‘做好’），并明确表态赞同，抛出中心论点。
- 第 2 段 分论点一加个人事例 主题句：做好成就个人成长；再配一个具体事例（如同学反复打磨论文）支撑。
- 第 3 段 分论点二加社会事例 主题句：精益求精推动社会进步；再配工程师/工匠 spare no effort 的事例支撑。
- 第 4 段 回扣格言收束升华 呼应格言、落到‘作为青年学生’的自身态度，做到首尾呼应。
落点：把 What is worth doing is worth doing well 解释为‘一旦认定值得做，就应追求卓越而非敷衍’，随即表明完全赞同，引出全文中心。
- 释义亮出格言 The proverb "___" carries a simple yet profound message: once we decide ___, we should ___ rather than ___.
- 一句话表态 I firmly agree with this view.
落点：主题句‘把事做好是个人成长最可靠的路径’；事例用同学反复重写论文、最终既得奖又练出耐心，说明精益求精带来真实的能力回报。
- 亮出分论点主题句 To begin with, ___ is the surest path to ___.
- 引出具体事例 Take ___, who ___; the effort not only ___ but also ___.
落点：主题句‘做好的精神推动社会进步’；事例用工程师、工匠 spare no effort 打磨产品，带来可靠的桥梁、手机、药品；再用一句反面假设收紧。
- 递进衔接换角度 Furthermore, the spirit of ___ drives ___ forward.
- 反面假设强化 Had they been content with ___, ___ would ___.
落点：呼应格言，总判断‘凡值得投入的事都值得我们全力做好’；落到青年学生，倡导抛弃‘应付了事’的心态、对大小事都用心做好。
- 收束呼应格言 In conclusion, whatever ___ deserves our very best.
- 落到自身提态度 As young students, we should ___ and devote ourselves to ___ until ___.
本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分
按阅卷四维（内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式）给出本题达标要点，并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。
- 内容切题 紧扣做好而非做不做 本题最易跑题的地方是把 What is worth doing is worth doing well 写成‘要不要去做’或泛谈‘坚持’。达标要点：每段都要指向‘把事做好、精益求精’，并有清晰的赞同立场。
- 结构连贯 四段清晰首尾呼应 本题达标要点：四段各司其职、用递进词衔接，结尾一句回扣格言，避免通篇一段到底或段落之间跳接无逻辑。
- 语言准确 用准做好类高级表达 本题达标要点：围绕‘做好’的高级表达要用对（pursue excellence、strive for perfection、spare no effort），并做到句式长短结合，避免通篇简单句。
- 字数格式 落在规定词数区间 本题硬性要求 at least 150 words but no more than 200 words，低于下限或超过上限都直接扣分；无收信人、无署名，格式上就是标准议论短文，不要加称呼落款。
- 跑题成要不要做事 反面示例："Everyone should keep doing things and never give up, because persistence is the key to success."（通篇在谈‘坚持去做’，完全没碰‘做好’）。改法："Once we decide a task is worth doing, we should not stop at finishing it but push ourselves to do it well."（把落点拉回‘做好’）。
- 抽象说理无例证 反面示例："Doing things well is very important and beneficial. It can help us a lot and make us better."（只有空泛判断）。改法："Take my roommate, who rewrote his thesis five times and finally won an honour—his care for detail became a real skill."（补上具体事例）。
- 只复述格言无立场 反面示例："The saying means that if a thing is worth doing, then it is worth doing well. This is what the proverb tells us."（原地打转、没有观点）。改法："The proverb reminds us to pursue excellence, and I firmly agree that anything worth our effort deserves to be done well."（解释后立刻表态）。
常见问题
围绕本题的写作题目与要求、作文类型、立意要点、参考范文、谋篇分段与评分丢分，逐条给出可核对的答案。
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- 2020年9月英语六级真题第2套 写作（赞同并论证这句格言）的参考范文是怎样的？多少词？
- 2020年9月英语六级真题第2套 写作的参考范文（189 词）：The proverb "What is worth doing is worth doing well" carries a simple yet profound message: once we decide that something is worth our effort, we should pursue excellence rather than settle for a careless, half-finished job. I firmly agree with this view. To begin with, doing things well is the surest path to personal growth. When a student is devoted to a task and strives for perfection, every detail he polishes sharpens his own ability. Take my roommate, who rewrote his graduation thesis five times; the effort not only earned him an honour but also trained the patience he now relies on at work. Furthermore, the spirit of doing well drives society forward. Great engineers and craftsmen who spare no effort to refine their products give us the reliable bridges, phones and medicines we depend on every day. Had they been content with a rough result, progress would slow and quality would collapse. In conclusion, whatever is worth our time deserves our very best. As young students, we should abandon the get-it-done-quickly attitude and devote ourselves to every task, big or small, until it is truly done well.
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- 按内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式四维评分，本题达标要点：内容切题——本题最易跑题的地方是把 What is worth doing is worth doing well 写成‘要不要去做’或泛谈‘坚持’。达标要点：每段都要指向‘把事做好、精益求精’，并有清晰的赞同立场；结构连贯——本题达标要点：四段各司其职、用递进词衔接，结尾一句回扣格言，避免通篇一段到底或段落之间跳接无逻辑；语言准确——本题达标要点：围绕‘做好’的高级表达要用对（pursue excellence、strive for perfection、spare no effort），并做到句式长短结合，避免通篇简单句；字数格式——本题硬性要求 at least 150 words but no more than 200 words，低于下限或超过上限都直接扣分；无收信人、无署名，格式上就是标准议论短文，不要加称呼落款。 典型低分写法（须避免）：反面示例："Everyone should keep doing things and never give up, because persistence is the key to success."（通篇在谈‘坚持去做’，完全没碰‘做好’）。改法："Once we decide a task is worth doing, we should not stop at finishing it but push ourselves to do it well."（把落点拉回‘做好’）；反面示例："Doing things well is very important and beneficial. It can help us a lot and make us better."（只有空泛判断）。改法："Take my roommate, who rewrote his thesis five times and finally won an honour—his care for detail became a real skill."（补上具体事例）；反面示例："The saying means that if a thing is worth doing, then it is worth doing well. This is what the proverb tells us."（原地打转、没有观点）。改法："The proverb reminds us to pursue excellence, and I firmly agree that anything worth our effort deserves to be done well."（解释后立刻表态）。