2015年12月·第2套英语四级写作 · 题目、范文与解析
本页是 2015年12月英语四级真题第2套 写作 的写作真题页（四六级短文写作）—— 与试卷排版同一卷面：完整写作要求（Directions，词数要求 120–180 词）连续排印 ，卷面下方直接给出参考范文（148 词）与整篇中译、逐段拆解，另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。
写作题和范文
本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2015年12月·第2套 英语四级写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面：完整写作要求（Directions，含主题、文体、词数与署名约束）连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题；卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。
【参考范文 · 148 词】写作无唯一标准答案，以下为达标示范
The saying goes that listening is more important than talking. From my perspective, this remark makes good sense, because only by paying close attention to others' opinions can we truly understand a situation and respond wisely.
A good case in point is teamwork. In a group project I once joined, our leader kept talking and ignored our suggestions, and the plan soon fell apart. Later, another leader chose to listen carefully to every member's idea before making a decision, and the task was completed smoothly. History offers a similar lesson: many wise leaders, such as ancient emperors who welcomed honest advice, achieved great success precisely because they were attentive listeners rather than endless talkers.
In conclusion, being a patient listener enables us to gather wisdom, avoid mistakes and build mutual understanding. Therefore, we should learn to close our mouths and open our ears before we rush to speak.
【参考译文】
俗话说，倾听比说话更重要。在我看来，这句话很有道理，因为只有专注地关注他人的意见，我们才能真正理解一件事，并做出明智的回应。
一个很好的例子就是团队合作。在我曾参加的一个小组项目里，我们的组长只顾自己一直说，无视我们的建议，结果计划很快就散了架。后来另一位组长在做决定前，选择认真倾听每一位成员的想法，任务便顺利完成。历史也给出了相似的教训：许多明智的领袖，比如那些乐于纳谏的古代帝王，之所以取得巨大成功，正是因为他们是专注的倾听者，而非喋喋不休的空谈者。
总而言之，做一个耐心的倾听者能让我们汇聚智慧、避免错误、建立相互理解。因此，在急于开口之前，我们应当学会闭上嘴、张开耳。
【第 1 段】复述加表态到位。首段用 The saying goes that listening is more important than talking 复述了格言，紧接 From my perspective, this remark makes good sense 亮明认同立场并给出理由，落实了 commenting on the saying 的评论要求，一步搭好全文纲领。
【第 2 段】两例都回扣中心。本段先用 A good case in point is teamwork 引出团队正反对比，再用 History offers a similar lesson 补一个名人事例，最后 precisely because they were attentive listeners rather than endless talkers 把例子回扣观点，扎实落实了 cite examples to illustrate the importance of paying attention to others’ opinions。
【第 3 段】首尾呼应升华。尾段用 In conclusion 概括倾听价值，Therefore, we should learn to close our mouths and open our ears 提出可执行倡议，呼应首段对格言的认同，干净收束。
这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么
动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ，再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断，不是通用套路。
评论并认同格言
写一篇短文评论并支持这句格言：commenting on the saying Listening is more important than talking.。核心不是罗列倾听的好处，而是先对『倾听是否真的比说话更重要』表态，再用例子把这个立场撑起来。
面向阅卷人的正式书面语
这是一篇没有具体收信人的议论短文，读者就是阅卷老师，用第一人称表达个人立场即可（如 From my perspective），全程用正式书面语，避免缩写和口语，不需要称呼语和署名。
认同倾听更重要
明确表态：认同 Listening is more important than talking.，因为只有先专注倾听别人的意见，才能真正理解情况、做出明智反应。
- 团队协作靠倾听 在团队合作中，愿意倾听每个成员意见的领导者往往把事情做成，只顾自己说、听不进建议的则容易失败——正是题目要求的 paying attention to others’ opinions 的价值所在。
- 名人因倾听成事 用一个具体名人/历史事例（如善纳谏言的明君）说明：真正有智慧的人是 attentive listener 而非 endless talker，落实题目 cite examples to illustrate the importance 的硬要求。
- 倾听带来相互理解 尾段升华：耐心倾听能汇聚智慧、少犯错误、建立 mutual understanding，因此我们应先学会闭嘴倾听再开口。
怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架
按写作家族给出现成的段落框架（每段承担什么功能），并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架（留出填本题内容的空位）。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。
- 第 1 段 引格言加表态 复述格言 Listening is more important than talking. 并亮明自己认同的立场，给出一句核心理由作为全文纲领。
- 第 2 段 举例论证 用团队协作的正反对比＋一个名人事例，落实 cite examples to illustrate the importance of paying attention to others’ opinions，证明倾听他人意见为何更重要。
- 第 3 段 重申升华 总结倾听的价值并呼应首段立场，发出一句可执行的倡议收尾。
内容落点：复述 Listening is more important than talking.，表明自己认同，理由是只有专注 paying attention to others’ opinions 才能真正理解情况、明智回应。
- 复述格言 The saying goes that ＿＿（把格言转写成自己的话）.
- 亮明立场 From my perspective, this remark makes good sense, because ＿＿（一句核心理由）.
内容落点：先讲团队项目中只顾说话的领导失败、愿意倾听的领导成功的对比，再举善纳谏言的明君作为名人事例，两个例子都回扣 the importance of paying attention to others’ opinions。
- 引例过渡 A good case in point is ＿＿（例子对象）.
- 正反对比 ＿＿ kept talking and ignored ＿＿, while ＿＿ chose to listen carefully, and the result was ＿＿（用一正一反凸显差别）.
- 回扣中心 ..., precisely because they were ＿＿ rather than ＿＿（把例子拉回你要证明的观点）.
内容落点：总结耐心倾听能汇聚智慧、少犯错、建立相互理解，呼应首段对格言的认同，最后倡议『先倾听再开口』。
- 总结收束 In conclusion, ＿＿（用一句概括前文的核心结论）.
- 呼吁升华 Therefore, we should ＿＿（给出一个可执行的倡议）.
本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分
按阅卷四维（内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式）给出本题达标要点，并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。
- 内容切题 必须表态并举例 本题两条硬线：一是对 Listening is more important than talking. 明确表态，二是落实 cite examples to illustrate；只讲道理不给例子，或倾听说话各说一半，都算不切题。
- 结构连贯 三段首尾呼应 本题走三段：引格言表态—举例论证—重申升华，尾段要回扣首段对『倾听更重要』的认同，别让例子孤零零挂着。
- 语言准确 备好倾听词块 用准 pay attention to others' opinions、attentive listener、mutual understanding 这类与倾听相关的词块，比反复用 listen 更显水平，也更贴题。
- 字数格式 卡住上下限 本题要求 at least 120 words but no more than 180 words，是硬性上下限；结尾尤其要留意收束，别为凑字重复啰嗦。
- 只喊重要不给例 反面示例：Listening is very important. Everyone should listen more because listening is good and helpful for us. 反复喊重要却无一例，违背 cite examples to illustrate。改成：A good case in point is teamwork: the leader who listened to every member's idea succeeded, while the one who only talked failed.
- 两边各半没主见 反面示例：Listening is important, but talking is also important, so both are the same. 把 Listening is more important than talking. 写成了各打五十大板。改成：From my perspective, listening is indeed more important than talking, because it helps us understand others before we respond.
- 举例不回扣 反面示例：Steve Jobs was a great man and he founded Apple.（讲完就停，没说这和倾听有什么关系）改成：He often listened to his engineers' ideas before making key decisions, which shows that attentive listening leads to better results.
常见问题
围绕本题的写作题目与要求、作文类型、立意要点、参考范文、谋篇分段与评分丢分，逐条给出可核对的答案。
- 2015年12月英语四级真题第2套 写作的写作题目是什么？要求写多少字？
- 2015年12月英语四级真题第2套 写作（Part I）的写作要求为：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Listening is more important than talking.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of paying attention to others’ opinions. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 本题要求120–180 词。
- 2015年12月英语四级真题第2套 写作属于哪种类型的作文、有什么格式要求？
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- 2015年12月英语四级真题第2套 写作（评论并认同格言）应该怎么立意、写哪几个要点？
- 2015年12月英语四级真题第2套 写作的中心立意是明确表态：认同 Listening is more important than talking.，因为只有先专注倾听别人的意见，才能真正理解情况、做出明智反应。可展开的要点：在团队合作中，愿意倾听每个成员意见的领导者往往把事情做成，只顾自己说、听不进建议的则容易失败——正是题目要求的 paying attention to others’ opinions 的价值所在；用一个具体名人/历史事例（如善纳谏言的明君）说明：真正有智慧的人是 attentive listener 而非 endless talker，落实题目 cite examples to illustrate the importance 的硬要求；尾段升华：耐心倾听能汇聚智慧、少犯错误、建立 mutual understanding，因此我们应先学会闭嘴倾听再开口。
- 2015年12月英语四级真题第2套 写作（评论并认同格言）的参考范文是怎样的？多少词？
- 2015年12月英语四级真题第2套 写作的参考范文（148 词）：The saying goes that listening is more important than talking. From my perspective, this remark makes good sense, because only by paying close attention to others' opinions can we truly understand a situation and respond wisely. A good case in point is teamwork. In a group project I once joined, our leader kept talking and ignored our suggestions, and the plan soon fell apart. Later, another leader chose to listen carefully to every member's idea before making a decision, and the task was completed smoothly. History offers a similar lesson: many wise leaders, such as ancient emperors who welcomed honest advice, achieved great success precisely because they were attentive listeners rather than endless talkers. In conclusion, being a patient listener enables us to gather wisdom, avoid mistakes and build mutual understanding. Therefore, we should learn to close our mouths and open our ears before we rush to speak.
- 2015年12月英语四级真题第2套 写作（评论并认同格言）这篇作文怎么分段、每段写什么？
- 2015年12月英语四级真题第2套 写作的参考范文共 3 段：第 1 段（引格言加表态）复述格言 Listening is more important than talking. 并亮明自己认同的立场，给出一句核心理由作为全文纲领；第 2 段（举例论证）用团队协作的正反对比＋一个名人事例，落实 cite examples to illustrate the importance of paying attention to others’ opinions，证明倾听他人意见为何更重要；第 3 段（重申升华）总结倾听的价值并呼应首段立场，发出一句可执行的倡议收尾。
- 2015年12月英语四级真题第2套 写作（评论并认同格言）作文容易在哪丢分？
- 按内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式四维评分，本题达标要点：内容切题——本题两条硬线：一是对 Listening is more important than talking. 明确表态，二是落实 cite examples to illustrate；只讲道理不给例子，或倾听说话各说一半，都算不切题；结构连贯——本题走三段：引格言表态—举例论证—重申升华，尾段要回扣首段对『倾听更重要』的认同，别让例子孤零零挂着；语言准确——用准 pay attention to others' opinions、attentive listener、mutual understanding 这类与倾听相关的词块，比反复用 listen 更显水平，也更贴题；字数格式——本题要求 at least 120 words but no more than 180 words，是硬性上下限；结尾尤其要留意收束，别为凑字重复啰嗦。 典型低分写法（须避免）：反面示例：Listening is very important. Everyone should listen more because listening is good and helpful for us. 反复喊重要却无一例，违背 cite examples to illustrate。改成：A good case in point is teamwork: the leader who listened to every member's idea succeeded, while the one who only talked failed；反面示例：Listening is important, but talking is also important, so both are the same. 把 Listening is more important than talking. 写成了各打五十大板。改成：From my perspective, listening is indeed more important than talking, because it helps us understand others before we respond；反面示例：Steve Jobs was a great man and he founded Apple.（讲完就停，没说这和倾听有什么关系）改成：He often listened to his engineers' ideas before making key decisions, which shows that attentive listening leads to better results。