2020年12月·第3套英语六级写作 · 题目、范文与解析
本页是 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作 的写作真题页(四六级短文写作)—— 与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,词数要求 150–200 词)连续排印 ,卷面下方直接给出参考范文(163 词)与整篇中译、逐段拆解,另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。
写作题和范文
本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2020年12月·第3套 英语六级写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,含主题、文体、词数与署名约束)连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题;卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。
【参考范文 · 163 词】写作无唯一标准答案,以下为达标示范
In an era of rapid change, students inevitably encounter difficulties in their studies, career hunting and daily life. It is therefore of great importance that they be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges.
There are several convincing reasons why this ability deserves cultivation. To begin with, facing challenges pushes students to unlock their hidden potential. A first-year student who dares to tackle a tough research project, for instance, often discovers strengths he never knew he possessed. More importantly, meeting challenges sharpens one's resilience and problem-solving skills. Every setback in a competition or an internship teaches valuable lessons that no textbook can offer. As a result, such students grow into independent thinkers who refuse to give up easily.
In conclusion, since the ability to meet challenges prepares young people for fierce competition and lifelong growth, schools and families should spare no effort to foster it. Only by embracing challenges rather than avoiding them can students truly become masters of their own future.
【参考译文】
在一个飞速变化的时代,学生在学业、求职和日常生活中不可避免地会遇到种种困难。因此,鼓励他们培养迎接挑战的能力就显得尤为重要。
这种能力值得培养,有几条令人信服的理由。首先,直面挑战会促使学生释放自身潜藏的潜能。举例来说,一个敢于接下高难度课题的大一新生,往往会发现自己身上从未察觉的实力。更重要的是,迎接挑战会磨砺人的抗挫能力与解决问题的本领。竞赛或实习中的每一次挫折,都会教给人课本无法给予的宝贵经验。因此,这样的学生会成长为不轻言放弃的独立思考者。
总之,既然迎接挑战的能力为年轻人应对激烈竞争与终身成长打下根基,学校与家庭就应不遗余力地去培养它。唯有拥抱挑战而非逃避挑战,学生才能真正成为自己未来的主人。
【第 1 段】背景一句随即表态。首段用 In an era of rapid change 一句背景引入,紧接着 It is therefore of great importance that they be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges 直接亮明立场,落实了『背景引入句架』与『亮明立场句架』,一两句就完成表态,正面对准 why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges。
【第 2 段】递进串两理由各配微例。主体段用 To begin with … More importantly … 把『潜能』『抗挫与解决问题』两条理由分层串起,A first-year student … for instance 与 a competition or an internship 各给一个大学生场景微例,最后 As a result 小结回扣中心,落实了理由分层、举例过渡、因果小结三个句架。
【第 3 段】因果归纳后倒装呼吁。尾段 In conclusion, since … 把前文理由归纳为一句因果并重申立场,末句 Only by embracing challenges … can students truly become masters of their own future 用倒装强调唯一途径收束,落实了归纳因果与唯一路径两个句架,形成首尾闭环。
这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么
动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ,再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断,不是通用套路。
论证为何该鼓励学生练迎挑战能力
题目要求 write an essay on why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges,核心任务是回答 why——论证『为什么应当鼓励学生培养迎接挑战的能力』这件事的重要性/原因,而不是讲『怎么培养』。全文都在回答 why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges 这一个问题。
面向阅卷人的正式书面语
本题是一篇没有具体收信人的议论短文,无需称呼与署名,只要用面向阅卷人的正式书面语即可:不用缩写口语(don't、gonna),多用完整句和书面词,态度客观说理。语域这一关在议论文里不像应用文那样致命,一句话带过、别强行加戏。
应大力鼓励学生练就迎挑战的能力
中心立场一句话钉死:学生理应被鼓励去培养迎接挑战的能力,因为这种能力对其潜能、抗挫与未来发展至关重要。这正面回应了 why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges,全篇围绕这一个 why 展开。
- 挑战激发被埋没的潜能 第一条理由:直面挑战会逼学生把平时用不到的潜力挖出来。可用大学生熟悉的场景——一个新生硬着头皮接下一个难做的课题,往往发现自己原来能行。
- 挑战锤炼抗挫与解决问题能力 第二条理由:每一次应对挑战都在磨练抗挫力和解决问题的本领。可举竞赛失利、实习受挫这类微例——课本给不了的经验,恰恰在闯关中学到。
- 为未来激烈竞争与终身成长做准备 第三条理由(收尾拔高用):迎挑战的能力是为将来激烈的求职竞争与终身成长打底,让学生成为不轻易放弃的独立思考者。
怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架
按写作家族给出现成的段落框架(每段承担什么功能),并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架(留出填本题内容的空位)。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。
- 第 1 段 背景切入+亮明立场 用一句时代/校园背景引入话题,随即直接表态:应当鼓励学生培养迎接挑战的能力,回应 why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges。
- 第 2 段 并列理由+微例论证 主体段,用连接词串起 2-3 个理由(潜能、抗挫与解决问题、成长),每条配一句解释或一个大学生场景的小例子。
- 第 3 段 重申立场+收尾呼吁 归纳全文因果,重申应鼓励这种能力,并轻点一句做法/呼吁收束。
内容落点:先点出在快速变化的时代,学生在学业、求职、日常生活里不可避免会碰到困难;随即表态——因此理应鼓励他们培养迎接挑战的能力,正面对准 why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges。
- 背景引入句架 In an era of ___, ___ inevitably encounter ___ in their studies, career hunting and daily life.(把时代特征、主体、困难填进空位)
- 亮明立场句架 It is therefore of great importance that they be encouraged to ___.(把核心命题填进空位,一句表态)
内容落点:理由一——直面挑战逼学生释放隐藏潜能,举一个新生接下难课题、发现自己能行的微例;理由二——应对挑战磨练抗挫力与解决问题能力,举竞赛或实习受挫学到课本给不了的经验;小结——这样的学生长成不轻易放弃的独立思考者。
- 理由分层递进句架 To begin with, ___. More importantly, ___.(两个空位各放一条理由,用递进词分出主次)
- 举例过渡句架 A student who ___, for instance, often ___.(把具体人物动作与结果填进空位,让理由落地)
- 因果小结句架 As a result, such students ___.(把理由推出的结果填进空位,回扣中心)
内容落点:既然迎挑战的能力为将来的激烈竞争和终身成长打底,学校与家庭就应不遗余力地培养它;末句拔高——唯有拥抱而非回避挑战,学生才能真正成为自己未来的主人。
- 归纳因果收束句架 In conclusion, since ___, ___ should spare no effort to ___.(把归纳的原因、行动主体、做法填进空位)
- 唯一路径强调句架 Only by ___ can students truly ___.(用 Only by 倒装强调唯一途径,把手段与目标填进空位)
本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分
按阅卷四维(内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式)给出本题达标要点,并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。
- 内容切题 全篇必须答why不写how 本题达标关键是全文都在论证 why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges,即重要性/原因;最易失分处是写成『如何培养挑战能力』的做法清单,那样即便语言再好也偏题。
- 结构连贯 理由分层且用连接词串联 本题达标要点是 2-3 个理由层次分明、用因果与递进词串起;最易失分处是理由重复或并列不分主次、缺连接词,读起来像流水账。
- 语言准确 书面词准确避免逐字直译 本题应多用 encounter、resilience、potential 等书面词,句式适度变化;最易失分处是把中文『培养能力』『面对挑战』逐字直译成生硬搭配,或全篇短句无变化。
- 字数格式 落在150到200硬性区间内 本题要求 at least 150 words but no more than 200 words,是硬性区间,写不足下限或大幅超出上限都会失分;无需称呼署名,正常分段即可。
- 写成如何培养的做法清单 反面示例:To develop this ability, students should get up early, make detailed plans and practice every day.(这是在教怎么做,跑题)。改成对准 why:Because this ability enables students to unlock their potential, it deserves to be actively encouraged.
- 空喊挑战很重要却无理由 反面示例:Challenges are very important. Everyone should meet challenges. Challenges make us strong.(三句都在重复口号,无理由无例子)。改成有支撑:Challenges matter because every setback in a competition teaches lessons that no textbook can offer.
- 中式直译培养面对挑战的怪句 反面示例:Students should cultivate the ability of facing to the difficult, so their body will become strong.(cultivate the ability of facing to、body strong 都是硬翻的错搭)。改成地道:Students should develop the ability to meet challenges so that they can grow more resilient.
常见问题
围绕本题的写作题目与要求、作文类型、立意要点、参考范文、谋篇分段与评分丢分,逐条给出可核对的答案。
- 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作的写作题目是什么?要求写多少字?
- 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作(Part I)的写作要求为:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 本题要求150–200 词。
- 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作属于哪种类型的作文、有什么格式要求?
- 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作 是四六级短文写作(议论 / 应用文 / 报告等短文)。写作要求150–200 词。
- 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作(论证为何该鼓励学生练迎挑战能力)应该怎么立意、写哪几个要点?
- 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作的中心立意是中心立场一句话钉死:学生理应被鼓励去培养迎接挑战的能力,因为这种能力对其潜能、抗挫与未来发展至关重要。这正面回应了 why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges,全篇围绕这一个 why 展开。可展开的要点:第一条理由:直面挑战会逼学生把平时用不到的潜力挖出来。可用大学生熟悉的场景——一个新生硬着头皮接下一个难做的课题,往往发现自己原来能行;第二条理由:每一次应对挑战都在磨练抗挫力和解决问题的本领。可举竞赛失利、实习受挫这类微例——课本给不了的经验,恰恰在闯关中学到;第三条理由(收尾拔高用):迎挑战的能力是为将来激烈的求职竞争与终身成长打底,让学生成为不轻易放弃的独立思考者。
- 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作(论证为何该鼓励学生练迎挑战能力)的参考范文是怎样的?多少词?
- 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作的参考范文(163 词):In an era of rapid change, students inevitably encounter difficulties in their studies, career hunting and daily life. It is therefore of great importance that they be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges. There are several convincing reasons why this ability deserves cultivation. To begin with, facing challenges pushes students to unlock their hidden potential. A first-year student who dares to tackle a tough research project, for instance, often discovers strengths he never knew he possessed. More importantly, meeting challenges sharpens one's resilience and problem-solving skills. Every setback in a competition or an internship teaches valuable lessons that no textbook can offer. As a result, such students grow into independent thinkers who refuse to give up easily. In conclusion, since the ability to meet challenges prepares young people for fierce competition and lifelong growth, schools and families should spare no effort to foster it. Only by embracing challenges rather than avoiding them can students truly become masters of their own future.
- 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作(论证为何该鼓励学生练迎挑战能力)这篇作文怎么分段、每段写什么?
- 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作的参考范文共 3 段:第 1 段(背景切入+亮明立场)用一句时代/校园背景引入话题,随即直接表态:应当鼓励学生培养迎接挑战的能力,回应 why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges;第 2 段(并列理由+微例论证)主体段,用连接词串起 2-3 个理由(潜能、抗挫与解决问题、成长),每条配一句解释或一个大学生场景的小例子;第 3 段(重申立场+收尾呼吁)归纳全文因果,重申应鼓励这种能力,并轻点一句做法/呼吁收束。
- 2020年12月英语六级真题第3套 写作(论证为何该鼓励学生练迎挑战能力)作文容易在哪丢分?
- 按内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式四维评分,本题达标要点:内容切题——本题达标关键是全文都在论证 why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges,即重要性/原因;最易失分处是写成『如何培养挑战能力』的做法清单,那样即便语言再好也偏题;结构连贯——本题达标要点是 2-3 个理由层次分明、用因果与递进词串起;最易失分处是理由重复或并列不分主次、缺连接词,读起来像流水账;语言准确——本题应多用 encounter、resilience、potential 等书面词,句式适度变化;最易失分处是把中文『培养能力』『面对挑战』逐字直译成生硬搭配,或全篇短句无变化;字数格式——本题要求 at least 150 words but no more than 200 words,是硬性区间,写不足下限或大幅超出上限都会失分;无需称呼署名,正常分段即可。 典型低分写法(须避免):反面示例:To develop this ability, students should get up early, make detailed plans and practice every day.(这是在教怎么做,跑题)。改成对准 why:Because this ability enables students to unlock their potential, it deserves to be actively encouraged;反面示例:Challenges are very important. Everyone should meet challenges. Challenges make us strong.(三句都在重复口号,无理由无例子)。改成有支撑:Challenges matter because every setback in a competition teaches lessons that no textbook can offer;反面示例:Students should cultivate the ability of facing to the difficult, so their body will become strong.(cultivate the ability of facing to、body strong 都是硬翻的错搭)。改成地道:Students should develop the ability to meet challenges so that they can grow more resilient。