2022年12月·第2套英语六级写作 · 题目、范文与解析
本页是 2022年12月英语六级真题第2套 写作 的写作真题页(四六级短文写作)—— 与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,词数要求 150–200 词)连续排印 ,卷面下方直接给出参考范文(180 词)与整篇中译、逐段拆解,另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。
写作题和范文
本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2022年12月·第2套 英语六级写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,含主题、文体、词数与署名约束)连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题;卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。
【参考范文 · 180 词】写作无唯一标准答案,以下为达标示范
In an era of information explosion, it is vitally important to develop the ability to think critically and make rational choices. Every day we are flooded with news, advertisements and social-media posts, yet not all of them are trustworthy. Only those who can sift truth from falsehood are able to stay clear-headed.
There are two compelling reasons why this ability matters. First, information today is a mixture of facts and rumours, and a careless reader can easily be misled. Take online rumours during public emergencies for example: people who forward them without checking often spread panic. Second, the cost of a wrong choice has risen sharply; whether we are selecting a course, a product or a career, rational judgement based on reliable evidence saves us from regret.
Therefore, we should never swallow information passively. By questioning the source, comparing different views and weighing the evidence before us, we can turn the endless flood of information into a real advantage rather than a heavy burden. In the end, critical thinking is not an optional skill but a survival tool for the modern mind.
【参考译文】
在信息爆炸的时代,培养批判性思维和作出理性选择的能力至关重要。我们每天都被新闻、广告和社交媒体帖子淹没,然而并非所有信息都值得信赖。只有那些能够去伪存真的人,才能保持头脑清醒。
这种能力之所以重要,有两个有力的理由。第一,如今的信息是事实与谣言的混合体,粗心的读者很容易被误导。以突发公共事件中的网络谣言为例:未经核实就转发的人往往会散布恐慌。第二,选择错误的代价急剧上升;无论我们是在选课、选产品还是选职业,基于可靠证据的理性判断都能让我们免于后悔。
因此,我们绝不该被动地全盘接收信息。通过质疑信息来源、比对不同观点、权衡眼前的证据,我们就能把无尽的信息洪流化为真正的优势,而非沉重的负担。归根结底,批判性思维并非可有可无的技能,而是现代人赖以生存的工具。
【第 1 段】照抄首句后接铺垫立场。首句 In an era of information explosion... 一字不差照抄,落实了‘照抄首句即破题’;随后 Every day we are flooded with news, advertisements and social-media posts 用‘亮明现状’句架铺垫,Only those who can sift truth from falsehood 用‘点出立场’句架把观点接出来。
【第 2 段】两理由各带一实例。There are two compelling reasons 用‘引出理由’句架开段,Take online rumours during public emergencies for example 用‘举例坐实’句架把第一条理由落到具体画面,Second... rational judgement based on reliable evidence 用‘递进第二理由’句架完成第二条并回扣理性选择,兑现了‘理由加实例撑主体’。
【第 3 段】回扣主题升华收束。Therefore, we should never swallow information passively 过渡到结论,By questioning the source... 收束做法,末句 critical thinking is not an optional skill but a survival tool 回扣首句主题并升华,落实了‘回扣首句再升华’。
这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么
动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ,再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断,不是通用套路。
论证批判性思维为何重要
本题要求 write an essay that begins with the sentence,即用给定首句开头写一篇议论文;交际目的只有一个——论证在信息爆炸的时代,学会 think critically and make rational choices 为什么重要。展开方式题目已给:You can make statements, give reasons, or cite examples to develop your essay.,也就是可以摆观点、讲理由、举例子,三者选一或组合。
面向阅卷人的正式议论
本题没有具体收信人,是纯议论文,任务只是 write an essay,所以无需称呼语、无需署名,也不必写日期。语域按‘面向阅卷人的正式书面语’即可:用完整句、用连接词、避免口语缩写和网络用语,但也不必强行拽生僻词到读不通。
信息爆炸下批判性思维不可或缺
全篇中心一句话:在真假信息泛滥的今天,唯有具备 think critically and make rational choices 的能力,人才能不被误导、不做错选择——所以它 vitally important。
- 信息真假混杂易被误导 第一个理由:今天的信息是事实与谣言的混合体,不加辨别就容易上当。配例——公共突发事件中,未经核实就转发的网络谣言会引发恐慌。
- 选错的代价越来越高 第二个理由:无论选课、选产品还是选职业,选择的成本在上升,只有基于可靠证据的理性判断才能避免后悔。这一条正回扣 make rational choices。
- 主动质疑与比对的应对 结尾落点:不被动接收信息,而是质疑来源、比对多方观点、权衡证据,把信息洪流变成优势而非负担。
怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架
按写作家族给出现成的段落框架(每段承担什么功能),并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架(留出填本题内容的空位)。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。
- 第 1 段 照抄首句并破题立场 逐字照抄给定首句作为开头,随后两句点明‘信息泛滥、唯有会辨别者才清醒’,把立场亮出来。
- 第 2 段 两条理由各配一例 主体论证段:第一条理由(信息真假混杂)配网络谣言之例,第二条理由(选择代价上升)配选课选职业之例。
- 第 3 段 回扣首句给出做法 结论段:提出‘不被动接收、主动质疑比对’的做法,回扣首句主题并升华为‘现代人的生存技能’。
照抄 In an era of information explosion, it is vitally important to develop the ability 起的整句首句,然后写‘每天新闻、广告、社交媒体扑面而来,并非都可信’,最后落到‘唯有能辨真伪者方能保持清醒’。
- 亮明现状 Every day we are flooded with ___, ___ and ___, yet not all of them are ___.
- 点出立场 Only those who can ___ are able to ___.
理由一:信息事实与谣言混杂、易被误导,例证为‘突发事件中未经核实的转发引发恐慌’;理由二:选错代价上升,例证为‘选课、选产品、选职业需靠可靠证据的理性判断避免后悔’,回扣 make rational choices。
- 引出理由 There are two compelling reasons why ___ matters. First, ___.
- 举例坐实 Take ___ for example: people who ___ often ___.
- 递进第二理由 Second, ___; whether we ___ or ___, ___ saves us from ___.
提出做法:不被动接收信息,而是质疑来源、比对不同观点、权衡证据,把信息洪流变成优势而非负担;最后升华——think critically and make rational choices 的能力已是现代人的生存技能。
- 过渡到结论 Therefore, we should never ___ passively.
- 收束做法 By ___, ___ and ___, we can turn ___ into ___ rather than ___.
- 升华拔高 In the end, ___ is not an optional ___ but a ___ for the modern mind.
本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分
按阅卷四维(内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式)给出本题达标要点,并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。
- 内容切题 全程回扣批判性思维 本题必须紧扣 think critically and make rational choices,不能写成泛泛的‘信息很重要’。达标要点:两条理由、结尾做法都要能挂回‘辨别信息、理性选择’这条主线,最易失分处是主体段跑去大谈‘信息技术的发展’而忘了批判性思维。
- 结构连贯 三段分明路标清晰 本题三段分工要明确:破题、论证、收束;段内用 First、Second、Take...for example、Therefore、In the end 串起理由与例子。失分处是通篇简单句、句间无连接,读起来像罗列。
- 语言准确 主题词准确点缀 本题可用 sift truth from falsehood、rational judgement、reliable evidence 等贴合 critical thinking / rational choice 的表达提分,但每句都要保证语法正确;失分处是为了炫词把句子写崩、或中式直译。
- 字数格式 卡在150到200且抄准首句 本题硬性要求 at least 150 words but no more than 200 words,不足或超出都扣分;格式上还要确保首句一字不差照抄。最易失分处是写嗨了超过上限、或为达下限反复重复同一句话。
- 改写首句 反面示例把首句改成‘Nowadays, thinking critically is very important in the information age.’——擅自改写、还漏了‘理性选择’,直接偏离要求。修正:原样照抄‘In an era of information explosion, it is vitally important to develop the ability to think critically and make rational choices.’作为第一句。
- 泛谈信息重要 反面示例整段写‘Information is everywhere and it makes our life convenient.’,通篇夸信息之便,却不提辨别与选择。修正:改成‘Because information today mixes facts with rumours, only those who think critically can avoid being misled.’,把落点拉回批判性思维。
- 只喊口号无例 反面示例‘We must think critically. It is very important. Everyone should do it.’三句都是口号、无一例证。修正:补一个具体例子‘During public emergencies, people who forward unverified rumours often spread needless panic.’让理由落地。
- 重复注水凑数 反面示例连写‘Critical thinking is important. Thinking critically really matters a lot. It is truly important to think in a critical way.’三句同义重复灌水。修正:删繁就简为一句并接理由‘Critical thinking matters because it helps us tell truth from falsehood.’,把省下的字数用来展开例子。
常见问题
围绕本题的写作题目与要求、作文类型、立意要点、参考范文、谋篇分段与评分丢分,逐条给出可核对的答案。
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