EXAM · 来自 英语六级写作 · 2024 年 6 月 · 第 3 套 · Part I

2024年6月·第3套英语六级写作 · 题目、范文与解析

本页是 2024年6月英语六级真题第3套 写作 的写作真题页(四六级短文写作)—— 与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,词数要求 150–200 词)连续排印 ,卷面下方直接给出参考范文(170 词)与整篇中译、逐段拆解,另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。

PROMPT & MODEL ESSAY · 写作题和范文

写作题和范文

本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2024年6月·第3套 英语六级写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,含主题、文体、词数与署名约束)连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题;卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。

真题卷第3套(2024-06) • 英语六级
Part I
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence “There is a growing awareness of the importance of digital literacy and skills in today’s world.” You can make comments, cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. (You should copy the sentence given in quotes at the beginning of your essay. )

【参考范文 · 170 词】写作无唯一标准答案,以下为达标示范

There is a growing awareness of the importance of digital literacy and skills in today’s world. As study, work and daily life move online, the ability to use digital tools wisely has become a basic survival skill rather than an optional advantage.

This importance is easy to feel in real situations. During the pandemic, all my courses were shifted to online platforms, and only classmates who could navigate video meetings, submit assignments and search for reliable sources kept up with the pace. Those who struggled with the technology quickly fell behind, not because they were less clever, but because they lacked the digital skills the new setting demanded. The same gap appears in the job market, where employers now expect graduates to handle data, communicate online and tell trustworthy information from rumours.

Therefore, digital literacy is no longer a bonus but a necessity. By actively learning to process information, protect our online safety and keep updating our skills, we can turn technology into a real advantage instead of a barrier.

【参考译文】

在当今世界,人们越来越意识到数字素养与技能的重要性。随着学习、工作和日常生活都转向线上,明智地使用数字工具已从一种可选的优势变成了一项基本的生存技能。

这种重要性在真实情境里最容易被感受到。疫情期间,我所有的课程都被搬到了线上平台,只有那些会操作视频会议、提交作业、检索可靠资料的同学才跟得上节奏。那些和技术较劲的人很快掉了队——不是因为他们不够聪明,而是因为他们缺少新环境所要求的数字技能。同样的差距也出现在求职市场:如今用人单位默认毕业生能够处理数据、在线沟通、并把可信信息与谣言区分开来。

因此,数字素养不再是加分项,而是一种必需品。只要我们主动学习处理信息、保护自身的网络安全、并不断更新技能,就能把技术变成真正的优势,而不是一道障碍。

【第 1 段】抄首句后加中心。首句一字不差照抄了 There is a growing awareness of the importance of digital literacy and skills in today’s world.,第二句用「As study, work and daily life move online... rather than an optional advantage」把现象升级为中心论点,落实了『照抄首句再点题』这一步。

【第 2 段】场景+对照写透。「During the pandemic... kept up with the pace」摆出网课亲历,「not because they were less clever, but because they lacked...」用正反对照凸显差距,「The same gap appears in the job market」再推向求职,正是『场景落地论证』四步的落地,兑现了 cite examples 的展开路径。

【第 3 段】重申+给出行动。「Therefore, digital literacy is no longer a bonus but a necessity」重申中心,「By actively learning to... we can turn technology into a real advantage」给出对策式升华,完成『重申加对策收尾』,避免了只喊口号的空洞结尾。

ANALYSIS · 审题与立意

这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么

动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ,再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断,不是通用套路。

核心任务

续写数字素养议论文

本题要写一篇议论文,且是首句续写:begins with the sentence 后引号里的句子必须原样抄在开头,You should copy the sentence given in quotes at the beginning of your essay. 把这一点钉死。这句话就是全文中心——论证「数字素养与技能在今天很重要」,其余每段都得围绕它展开。

读者 · 语域

面向阅卷人的正式书面语

本题是纯议论大作文,没有具体收信人,所以不设称呼、不落款,语域按正式书面英语走即可:不用缩写口语(don't 写成 do not)、不用第二人称直接教训读者。展开方式题目给了自由度——You can make comments, cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay.,可评论、举例或写个人经历,但语气都要保持客观得体。

中心立意

数字素养已是生存必备

本篇中心:在学习、工作、生活全面上网的今天,数字素养与技能已从「加分项」变成「生存必备」。这条立场直接顺着给定句 There is a growing awareness of the importance of digital literacy and skills in today’s world. 往前推一步,既贴题又给后文留出了论证空间。

要展开的要点
  1. 网课场景见真章 用一个具体场景落地:疫情期间课程全搬到线上,会用视频会议、交作业、查可靠资料的同学跟得上,不会的很快掉队——直接呼应 use your personal experiences to develop your essay 的个人经历路径。
  2. 求职市场的门槛 从个人推到社会:如今用人单位默认毕业生能处理数据、线上沟通、辨别真假信息,数字技能成了求职硬门槛,说明重要性不止在校园。
  3. 主动学习是出路 结尾给对策:既然重要,就要主动学会信息处理、保护上网安全、持续更新技能,把技术变成优势而非障碍,收束回中心。
STRUCTURE · 谋篇与逐段

怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架

按写作家族给出现成的段落框架(每段承担什么功能),并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架(留出填本题内容的空位)。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。

  1. 第 1 段
    抄首句+亮中心 原样照抄 There is a growing awareness of the importance of digital literacy and skills in today’s world.,再补一句把中心推进为「数字素养已是生存必备」,给全文定调。
  2. 第 2 段
    场景论证重要性 主体段:用网课亲历+求职门槛两个具体场景,正反对照证明数字素养为什么重要。
  3. 第 3 段
    重申立场+给对策 收尾段:重申「不再是加分项而是必需品」,并给出主动学习、更新技能的行动方向,呼应升华。
第 1 段 抄写+升级为中心

先逐字抄 There is a growing awareness of the importance of digital literacy and skills in today’s world.,再补充:随着学习、工作、生活搬到线上,明智使用数字工具已从「可选优势」变成「基本生存技能」。

  • 现象推进为观点 As ___ move online, the ability to ___ has become a basic ___ rather than an optional advantage.(把「某领域上网」填前空,「掌握某能力」填中空,自然把现象升级为立场)
第 2 段 网课掉队+求职门槛

疫情期间课程全上线,会用视频会议、交作业、查可靠来源的同学跟得上,不会技术的很快掉队——不是因为不聪明,而是缺了新环境要求的数字技能;同样的差距也出现在求职市场,用人单位默认毕业生能处理数据、线上沟通、辨别真假信息。

  • 举例过渡 This importance is easy to feel in real situations. During ___, only those who could ___ kept up with the pace.(用一句过渡把抽象拉回具体场景,再引出亲历)
  • 正反对照凸显差距 Those who ___ quickly fell behind, not because they were ___, but because they lacked ___.(not because…but because… 把表面原因和真实原因掰开,突出关键差距)
  • 由个人推向社会 The same gap appears in ___, where ___ now expect ___ to ___.(用 the same gap appears in 把私人经历推广到更普遍的层面)
第 3 段 必需品+主动更新

重申数字素养不再是加分项而是必需品;给出对策——主动学会信息处理、保护上网安全、持续更新技能,把技术变成真正的优势而非障碍。

  • 重申立场 Therefore, ___ is no longer a bonus but a necessity.(no longer…but… 把中心换一种说法再强调一次)
  • 对策式升华 By actively ___ and ___, we can turn ___ into a real advantage instead of a barrier.(By doing…, we can… 给出可行动的路径,收束到正面结果)
REVIEW · 自检避坑

本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分

按阅卷四维(内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式)给出本题达标要点,并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。

  • 内容切题
    全篇扣紧重要性 本题中心是「数字素养的重要性」,三段都得扣住它:别写成介绍数字工具有哪些(跑题),也别只抄首句却不表态。题目允许 make comments, cite examples or use your personal experiences,选其一写透即可。
  • 结构连贯
    三段路标清晰 本范文用 This importance is easy to feel(引例)、not because...but because(对照)、Therefore(收尾)三处路标把三段逻辑串起来。主体考生易犯的是通篇不分段或段间无过渡,务必让每段功能一眼可辨。
  • 语言准确
    数字素养话题词 本题可稳用一批话题表达:digital literacy、process information、online safety、reliable sources、keep updating skills。这些词既贴题又不易写错,比生造的中式长句稳妥。
  • 字数格式
    卡住硬区间 本题字数是硬区间:You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.,两头都扣分。篇幅只够一个饱满主体段,别贪多铺开三四个论点导致每点都浅。
典型低分写法 · 反面示例与改法
  • 改写首句失分 反面示例:把开头写成「Nowadays people gradually realize digital skills are important.」——这是改写、不是照抄,copy the sentence given in quotes at the beginning of your essay 的要求没满足。改法:老老实实抄「There is a growing awareness of the importance of digital literacy and skills in today’s world.」再往下写。
  • 通篇空喊无支撑 反面示例:「Digital literacy is very important. Everyone thinks it is important. Without it, life is very hard.」全是形容词、零场景。改法:换成一个具体情境——「During online classes, students who could not use digital tools quickly fell behind.」用事实说话。
  • 论点太多写不透 反面示例:一段里塞「教育、就业、医疗、社交、国家安全」五个方面,每个只有半句。改法:只留「网课学习」和「求职门槛」两点,各配一句细节和对照,把它们写透。
  • 中式直译别扭 反面示例:「With the society development, digital ability more and more important.」缺谓语、语序照搬中文。改法:「As society develops, digital skills are becoming increasingly important.」结构完整、表达地道。
FAQ · 关于本篇的常见问题

常见问题

围绕本题的写作题目与要求、作文类型、立意要点、参考范文、谋篇分段与评分丢分,逐条给出可核对的答案。

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2024年6月英语六级真题第3套 写作属于哪种类型的作文、有什么格式要求?
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2024年6月英语六级真题第3套 写作(续写数字素养议论文)应该怎么立意、写哪几个要点?
2024年6月英语六级真题第3套 写作的中心立意是本篇中心:在学习、工作、生活全面上网的今天,数字素养与技能已从「加分项」变成「生存必备」。这条立场直接顺着给定句 There is a growing awareness of the importance of digital literacy and skills in today’s world. 往前推一步,既贴题又给后文留出了论证空间。可展开的要点:用一个具体场景落地:疫情期间课程全搬到线上,会用视频会议、交作业、查可靠资料的同学跟得上,不会的很快掉队——直接呼应 use your personal experiences to develop your essay 的个人经历路径;从个人推到社会:如今用人单位默认毕业生能处理数据、线上沟通、辨别真假信息,数字技能成了求职硬门槛,说明重要性不止在校园;结尾给对策:既然重要,就要主动学会信息处理、保护上网安全、持续更新技能,把技术变成优势而非障碍,收束回中心。
2024年6月英语六级真题第3套 写作(续写数字素养议论文)的参考范文是怎样的?多少词?
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2024年6月英语六级真题第3套 写作(续写数字素养议论文)这篇作文怎么分段、每段写什么?
2024年6月英语六级真题第3套 写作的参考范文共 3 段:第 1 段(抄首句+亮中心)原样照抄 There is a growing awareness of the importance of digital literacy and skills in today’s world.,再补一句把中心推进为「数字素养已是生存必备」,给全文定调;第 2 段(场景论证重要性)主体段:用网课亲历+求职门槛两个具体场景,正反对照证明数字素养为什么重要;第 3 段(重申立场+给对策)收尾段:重申「不再是加分项而是必需品」,并给出主动学习、更新技能的行动方向,呼应升华。
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按内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式四维评分,本题达标要点:内容切题——本题中心是「数字素养的重要性」,三段都得扣住它:别写成介绍数字工具有哪些(跑题),也别只抄首句却不表态。题目允许 make comments, cite examples or use your personal experiences,选其一写透即可;结构连贯——本范文用 This importance is easy to feel(引例)、not because...but because(对照)、Therefore(收尾)三处路标把三段逻辑串起来。主体考生易犯的是通篇不分段或段间无过渡,务必让每段功能一眼可辨;语言准确——本题可稳用一批话题表达:digital literacy、process information、online safety、reliable sources、keep updating skills。这些词既贴题又不易写错,比生造的中式长句稳妥;字数格式——本题字数是硬区间:You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.,两头都扣分。篇幅只够一个饱满主体段,别贪多铺开三四个论点导致每点都浅。 典型低分写法(须避免):反面示例:把开头写成「Nowadays people gradually realize digital skills are important.」——这是改写、不是照抄,copy the sentence given in quotes at the beginning of your essay 的要求没满足。改法:老老实实抄「There is a growing awareness of the importance of digital literacy and skills in today’s world.」再往下写;反面示例:「Digital literacy is very important. Everyone thinks it is important. Without it, life is very hard.」全是形容词、零场景。改法:换成一个具体情境——「During online classes, students who could not use digital tools quickly fell behind.」用事实说话;反面示例:一段里塞「教育、就业、医疗、社交、国家安全」五个方面,每个只有半句。改法:只留「网课学习」和「求职门槛」两点,各配一句细节和对照,把它们写透;反面示例:「With the society development, digital ability more and more important.」缺谓语、语序照搬中文。改法:「As society develops, digital skills are becoming increasingly important.」结构完整、表达地道。

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