EXAM · 来自 英语六级写作 · 2019 年 6 月 · 第 2 套 · Part I

2019年6月·第2套英语六级写作 · 题目、范文与解析

本页是 2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作 的写作真题页(四六级短文写作)—— 与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,词数要求 150–200 词)连续排印 ,卷面下方直接给出参考范文(165 词)与整篇中译、逐段拆解,另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。

PROMPT & MODEL ESSAY · 写作题和范文

写作题和范文

本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2019年6月·第2套 英语六级写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,含主题、文体、词数与署名约束)连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题;卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。

真题卷第2套(2019-06) • 六级
Part I
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

【参考范文 · 165 词】写作无唯一标准答案,以下为达标示范

In our daily interactions, we inevitably encounter people whose habits, values and opinions differ from our own. In my view, mutual understanding and respect form the very foundation of any healthy interpersonal relationship, and their importance can hardly be overstated.

The most compelling reason is that understanding and respect help us resolve conflicts and build lasting trust. When we make an effort to see things from another person's perspective, misunderstandings that might otherwise escalate into quarrels can be smoothly settled. I once witnessed two roommates fall into a bitter dispute over daily routines; instead of blaming each other, they sat down, listened patiently, and reached a compromise. That single conversation, rooted in mutual respect, transformed their tense coexistence into a warm friendship.

Therefore, it is safe to conclude that mutual understanding and respect are indispensable to harmonious relationships. Once we learn to treat others with genuine empathy, we will find our connections far more rewarding. Let us cherish this principle in every relationship we build.

【参考译文】

在日常交往中,我们难免会遇到习惯、价值观和看法与自己不同的人。在我看来,相互理解与尊重构成了任何健康人际关系的根基,其重要性怎么强调都不为过。

最有说服力的理由是,理解与尊重能帮助我们化解冲突、建立持久的信任。当我们努力从他人的角度看问题时,那些本可能升级为争吵的误会,就能被平和地化解。我曾亲眼见到两位室友因作息问题陷入激烈争执;他们没有互相指责,而是坐下来耐心倾听,最终达成了妥协。那一次以相互尊重为根基的对话,把紧张的同住关系变成了温暖的友谊。

因此,可以有把握地得出结论:相互理解与尊重对于和谐的人际关系不可或缺。一旦我们学会以真诚的同理心待人,就会发现彼此的联系变得更加令人愉悦。让我们在所建立的每一段关系中珍视这一原则。

【第 1 段】背景加立场落地。落实了 outline 第 1 段"点题亮观点":首句 In our daily interactions... differ from our own 用"差异普遍"现象引入,次句 mutual understanding and respect form the very foundation... hardly be overstated 直接亮出中心观点,把话题词嵌入立场句,阅卷人第一眼即见观点。

【第 2 段】四句链把重要写实。落实"理由加事例论证"与"观点解释例证小结链":主题句 The most compelling reason... build lasting trust 给理由,When we make an effort to see things from another person's perspective 解释机制,roommates... reached a compromise 提供具体事例,末句 transformed their tense coexistence into a warm friendship 回扣中心,抽象的"重要"有了落点。

【第 3 段】重申加呼吁闭环。落实"总结并发出呼吁":Therefore, it is safe to conclude... indispensable to harmonious relationships 换说法重申中心,Let us cherish this principle in every relationship we build 发出呼吁,与首段观点呼应形成结构闭环。

ANALYSIS · 审题与立意

这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么

动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ,再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断,不是通用套路。

核心任务

论证理解与尊重为何重要

任务一句话钉死:就 write an essay on the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships 写一篇论说文,核心是论证 the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships。立场题目已经替你定好了(重要),你不需要正反辩论"到底重不重要",只需集中火力回答"它为什么重要、体现在哪",并落到具体做法或事例上。

读者 · 语域

面向阅卷人的正式书面语

本题是纯议论大作文,没有具体收信人或身份设定,也不需要称呼、落款。语域按"面向阅卷人的正式书面语"处理即可:用完整句、正式词汇,避免 gonna、a lot of 这类口语;不必强行加信件格式或虚构读者。

中心立意

理解尊重是健康关系的根基

中心一句话:相互理解与尊重是一切健康人际关系的根基,the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships 怎么强调都不为过。立场明确"重要",不骑墙、不讨论要不要重要。

要展开的要点
  1. 化解冲突、建立信任 主打分论点:理解与尊重能化解误会、平息冲突,并在此过程中建立起持久的信任(build trust、resolve conflicts)。这是最能展开、也最好举例的角度,作为主体段核心。
  2. 促成和谐持久的关系 延伸到结果层面:当双方以同理心相待,关系会更牢固、更令人满足,最终走向和谐(harmonious relationships)。这条承接主打论点的"信任",放到尾段收束成呼吁。
STRUCTURE · 谋篇与逐段

怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架

按写作家族给出现成的段落框架(每段承担什么功能),并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架(留出填本题内容的空位)。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。

  1. 第 1 段
    点题亮观点 引入人际交往中差异普遍存在的背景,随即亮明核心观点:相互理解与尊重是健康关系的根基,the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships 不容忽视。
  2. 第 2 段
    理由加事例论证 承担主体论证:抛出最有力的理由——理解与尊重能化解冲突、建立信任,再用一个具体事例(如室友矛盾的化解)把抽象的"重要"落到实处。
  3. 第 3 段
    总结并发出呼吁 回扣中心、重申理解与尊重对和谐关系不可或缺,并向读者发出"珍视这一原则"的简短呼吁收尾。
第 1 段 差异普遍故需理解尊重

写:人们的习惯、价值观、看法各不相同(差异是常态),因此 the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships 才凸显出来——它们是任何健康关系的根基,重要到怎么强调都不为过。

  • 现象引入 In our daily interactions, we inevitably encounter people whose ___ differ from our own.(横线填差异所在,如 habits, values and opinions)
  • 亮明立场 In my view, ___ form the very foundation of any healthy ___, and their importance can hardly be overstated.(前空填中心概念,后空填关系类型)
第 2 段 换位思考化解室友矛盾

主题句:理解与尊重能 resolve conflicts、build trust。解释:当我们试着从对方角度看问题,本会升级成争吵的误会就能平和解决。例证:两个室友因作息起争执,没有互相指责,而是坐下来耐心倾听、达成妥协,一次基于尊重的对话把紧张同居变成了温暖友谊。

  • 主题句给理由 The most compelling reason is that ___ help us resolve conflicts and build lasting trust.(横线填本段主体概念)
  • 解释机制 When we make an effort to ___, ___ that might otherwise escalate into ___ can be smoothly settled.(填做法、待化解的问题、恶化后果)
  • 举例过渡 I once witnessed ___; instead of ___, they ___ and reached a compromise.(填事件、错误做法、正确做法)
第 3 段 呼吁珍视理解尊重原则

重申:理解与尊重对 harmonious relationships 不可或缺;再补一句好处(以同理心待人,关系会更令人满足)与呼吁(让我们在每段关系中珍视这一原则)。

  • 引出结论 Therefore, it is safe to conclude that ___ are indispensable to ___.(前空填中心概念,后空填目标,如 harmonious relationships)
  • 发出呼吁 Once we learn to ___, we will find ___ far more rewarding. Let us cherish this principle in ___.(填做法、受益对象、适用范围)
REVIEW · 自检避坑

本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分

按阅卷四维(内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式)给出本题达标要点,并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。

  • 内容切题
    紧扣重要性勿跑题 全篇须紧扣 the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships,论证"为何重要"。最易失分处是跑去写"如何交朋友""怎样沟通技巧"等无关内容——本题问的是重要性,不是方法论清单。
  • 结构连贯
    三段各司其职有过渡 本题采用亮观点—论证—呼吁三段,务必分段清晰、用 In my view、The most compelling reason、Therefore 等词标出逻辑走向,避免观点、论证、结论糊成一团。
  • 语言准确
    善用主题搭配 多用 mutual understanding and respect、build trust、resolve conflicts、harmonious relationships 等主题搭配,让论述专业而不空泛;注意 person's perspective 的所有格、each other 等易错点。
  • 字数格式
    卡死150到200硬区间 务必满足 You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words:这是硬性上下限,既不能低于下限也不能超过上限,主体段写足、首尾段精简是控字数的稳妥办法。
典型低分写法 · 反面示例与改法
  • 通篇空喊很重要 反面示例:"Mutual understanding and respect are very important. They are important for everyone. We should all respect each other because it is very important." 三句都在重复"重要",无理由无例子。修正:"Mutual understanding and respect are vital because they help us resolve conflicts; for instance, two roommates once ended a bitter quarrel simply by listening to each other patiently." 给出理由加事例,重要性才落地。
  • 逐字直译不通顺 反面示例:"If people can understand each other, the relationship will become very good and no problem." 属逐字直译、搭配空泛。修正:"When people understand each other, their relationship grows stronger and conflicts are far less likely to arise." 用 grow stronger、conflicts arise 等地道表达,句子既通顺又精准。
  • 跑题写交友攻略 反面示例:"To make friends, first you should smile, then say hello, and often invite them to dinner..." 这是交友步骤,偏离了"理解与尊重的重要性"这一核心。修正:删去攻略,改写为"Respect matters because it makes friendships last: friends who respect each other's differences rarely drift apart." 重新对准重要性。
FAQ · 关于本篇的常见问题

常见问题

围绕本题的写作题目与要求、作文类型、立意要点、参考范文、谋篇分段与评分丢分,逐条给出可核对的答案。

2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作的写作题目是什么?要求写多少字?
2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作(Part I)的写作要求为:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 本题要求150–200 词。
2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作属于哪种类型的作文、有什么格式要求?
2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作 是四六级短文写作(议论 / 应用文 / 报告等短文)。写作要求150–200 词。
2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作(论证理解与尊重为何重要)应该怎么立意、写哪几个要点?
2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作的中心立意是中心一句话:相互理解与尊重是一切健康人际关系的根基,the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships 怎么强调都不为过。立场明确"重要",不骑墙、不讨论要不要重要。可展开的要点:主打分论点:理解与尊重能化解误会、平息冲突,并在此过程中建立起持久的信任(build trust、resolve conflicts)。这是最能展开、也最好举例的角度,作为主体段核心;延伸到结果层面:当双方以同理心相待,关系会更牢固、更令人满足,最终走向和谐(harmonious relationships)。这条承接主打论点的"信任",放到尾段收束成呼吁。
2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作(论证理解与尊重为何重要)的参考范文是怎样的?多少词?
2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作的参考范文(165 词):In our daily interactions, we inevitably encounter people whose habits, values and opinions differ from our own. In my view, mutual understanding and respect form the very foundation of any healthy interpersonal relationship, and their importance can hardly be overstated. The most compelling reason is that understanding and respect help us resolve conflicts and build lasting trust. When we make an effort to see things from another person's perspective, misunderstandings that might otherwise escalate into quarrels can be smoothly settled. I once witnessed two roommates fall into a bitter dispute over daily routines; instead of blaming each other, they sat down, listened patiently, and reached a compromise. That single conversation, rooted in mutual respect, transformed their tense coexistence into a warm friendship. Therefore, it is safe to conclude that mutual understanding and respect are indispensable to harmonious relationships. Once we learn to treat others with genuine empathy, we will find our connections far more rewarding. Let us cherish this principle in every relationship we build.
2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作(论证理解与尊重为何重要)这篇作文怎么分段、每段写什么?
2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作的参考范文共 3 段:第 1 段(点题亮观点)引入人际交往中差异普遍存在的背景,随即亮明核心观点:相互理解与尊重是健康关系的根基,the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships 不容忽视;第 2 段(理由加事例论证)承担主体论证:抛出最有力的理由——理解与尊重能化解冲突、建立信任,再用一个具体事例(如室友矛盾的化解)把抽象的"重要"落到实处;第 3 段(总结并发出呼吁)回扣中心、重申理解与尊重对和谐关系不可或缺,并向读者发出"珍视这一原则"的简短呼吁收尾。
2019年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作(论证理解与尊重为何重要)作文容易在哪丢分?
按内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式四维评分,本题达标要点:内容切题——全篇须紧扣 the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships,论证"为何重要"。最易失分处是跑去写"如何交朋友""怎样沟通技巧"等无关内容——本题问的是重要性,不是方法论清单;结构连贯——本题采用亮观点—论证—呼吁三段,务必分段清晰、用 In my view、The most compelling reason、Therefore 等词标出逻辑走向,避免观点、论证、结论糊成一团;语言准确——多用 mutual understanding and respect、build trust、resolve conflicts、harmonious relationships 等主题搭配,让论述专业而不空泛;注意 person's perspective 的所有格、each other 等易错点;字数格式——务必满足 You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words:这是硬性上下限,既不能低于下限也不能超过上限,主体段写足、首尾段精简是控字数的稳妥办法。 典型低分写法(须避免):反面示例:"Mutual understanding and respect are very important. They are important for everyone. We should all respect each other because it is very important." 三句都在重复"重要",无理由无例子。修正:"Mutual understanding and respect are vital because they help us resolve conflicts; for instance, two roommates once ended a bitter quarrel simply by listening to each other patiently." 给出理由加事例,重要性才落地;反面示例:"If people can understand each other, the relationship will become very good and no problem." 属逐字直译、搭配空泛。修正:"When people understand each other, their relationship grows stronger and conflicts are far less likely to arise." 用 grow stronger、conflicts arise 等地道表达,句子既通顺又精准;反面示例:"To make friends, first you should smile, then say hello, and often invite them to dinner..." 这是交友步骤,偏离了"理解与尊重的重要性"这一核心。修正:删去攻略,改写为"Respect matters because it makes friendships last: friends who respect each other's differences rarely drift apart." 重新对准重要性。

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