2014年考研英语一写作（小作文） · 题目、范文与解析
本页是 2014年考研英语一真题 写作 的写作真题页（应用文小作文）—— 与试卷排版同一卷面：完整写作要求（Directions，词数要求 约 100 词、不署真名）连续排印 ，卷面下方直接给出参考范文（108 词）与整篇中译、逐段拆解，另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。
写作题和范文
本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2014年 考研英语一写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面：完整写作要求（Directions，含主题、文体、词数与署名约束）连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题；卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。
Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.
You should include the details you think necessary. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
【参考范文 · 108 词】写作无唯一标准答案，以下为达标示范
Dear President,
I am a student from the Department of English. I am writing to offer some suggestions on how to improve students' physical condition.
To begin with, I would suggest that the university build more sports facilities, such as basketball courts and a swimming pool, so that students have places to exercise. In addition, it would be advisable to organize regular sports activities, like a monthly running competition, to arouse students' interest. Above all, please ensure that everyone enjoys at least one free hour for exercise each day.
I sincerely hope these suggestions will be taken into consideration. Thank you for your time.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
【参考译文】
尊敬的校长：
我是英语系的一名学生。我写信是想就如何改善学生的身体状况提出几点建议。
首先，我建议学校增建更多体育设施，比如篮球场和一个游泳池，让学生有地方锻炼。此外，定期组织体育活动也很可取，比如每月一次的长跑比赛，以激发学生的兴趣。最重要的是，请保证每人每天至少有一小时的自由锻炼时间。
我真诚地希望这些建议能被采纳。感谢您抽出时间。
此致敬礼 李明
【第 1 段】身份＋目的一句到位。用 I am a student from the Department of English 自报身份，再用 I am writing to offer some suggestions 直接亮出来信目的，落实了首段‘称呼开门见山亮目的’的方法，让校长立刻明白信的用意。
【第 2 段】三条措施各配细节。To begin with / In addition / Above all 领起三条措施，分别配上 basketball courts and a swimming pool、a monthly running competition、one free hour for exercise each day 三个细节，落实‘措施加细节各成一句’，把要求里的必要细节写实，措施不落空。
【第 3 段】谦逊收尾＋规范落款。I sincerely hope these suggestions will be taken into consideration 表达期望、Thank you for your time 致谢，末尾 Yours sincerely 后落款 Li Ming、通篇不写地址，落实‘礼貌收尾接落款’与署名硬要求。
这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么
动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ，再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断，不是通用套路。
给校长写信建议改善学生体质
任务动词是 suggesting（提建议），对象是学生体质：Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university，suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition。一句话钉死：以学生身份给校长写一封建议信，围绕‘怎样改善学生身体状况’提出可行措施，而不是抱怨、也不是泛泛谈健康。
写给校长，正式恭敬
收信人是 the president of your university，是校方最高负责人，你是普通学生，上行沟通，须用正式、礼貌、请求式的语域，称呼用 Dear President。署名有硬性规定：Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead.，所以落款只能写 Li Ming，绝不能露真名。
请校长采纳改善学生体质的建议
本信交际目的：向校长表明来意并促成改善——suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition，即用礼貌口吻请校方采纳几条可操作的改善学生身体状况的建议。
- 表明身份与写信目的 首段先亮学生身份，再点明来信是为 suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition 提建议，让校长一眼看懂信的用意。
- 给出具体可行措施 从增加体育设施、开展体育活动、保证每日锻炼时间三个方向给出 1-2 条能真正落地的措施，避免只喊口号。
- 为措施补充支撑细节 按要求 You should include the details you think necessary. 给措施配细节，如篮球场、每月长跑赛、每天一小时，让建议显得可执行。
- 礼貌表达期望致谢 尾段表达希望建议被采纳并致谢，收束全信、维持得体语气。
怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架
按写作家族给出现成的段落框架（每段承担什么功能），并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架（留出填本题内容的空位）。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。
- 第 1 段 称呼＋亮明写信目的 顶格 Dear President，首段自报学生身份，直接说明来信是为 suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition 提建议。
- 第 2 段 分点写措施＋配细节 主体段用递进连接词并列 2-3 条改善措施（设施、活动、时间），每条配一个具体细节支撑。
- 第 3 段 礼貌收尾＋落款 尾段表达采纳期望并致谢，末尾 Yours sincerely 后落款 Li Ming，不写地址、不署真名。
落点：自报是本校学生，写信是想就 suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition 向校长提几条建议。
- 自报身份 I am a student from ___ (院系/年级), and ...
- 点明写信目的 I am writing to offer some suggestions on how to ___ (要办的事).
落点：建议增建体育设施（如篮球场、游泳池），定期开展体育活动（如每月长跑赛），并保证每人每天至少一小时锻炼时间，呼应 You should include the details you think necessary.。
- 首要建议 To begin with, I would suggest that the university ___ (动词原形做某事).
- 追加建议 In addition, it would be advisable to ___ (做某事), such as ___ (细节).
- 强调重点 Above all, please ensure that ___ (最关键的一条).
落点：表达真诚希望建议被考虑并致谢，末尾按 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead. 落款 Li Ming，并遵守 Do not write the address.。
- 表达期望 I sincerely hope these suggestions will ___ (被采纳/被考虑).
- 致谢收尾 Thank you for ___ (your time / your consideration).
本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分
按阅卷四维（内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式）给出本题达标要点，并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。
- 内容切题 目的＋措施＋细节全覆盖 本题须同时写到写信目的、具体可行措施、支撑细节：措施要真能落地而非空喊，且照 You should include the details you think necessary. 配上细节，缺任何一环都算内容不全。
- 结构连贯 三段清晰＋递进连接 本题正文三段（目的—措施—收尾）各司其职，主体段用 To begin with / In addition / Above all 递进并列，避免措施一股脑堆在一句里而层次不清。
- 语言准确 委婉句式无低级错 本题应多用 I would suggest that.../It would be advisable to.../I sincerely hope... 这类委婉句式；主谓一致、单复数、时态等低级错误要在誊抄前查掉，语域保持正式礼貌。
- 字数格式 落款守规＋不写地址 本题字数须贴近 about 100 words，且必须遵守 Do not write the address. 与只署 Li Ming 的规定，格式件缺一即丢分。
- 署真名或写地址 反面示例：结尾写 Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei，还加上 No. 5 University Road。这违反 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead. 和 Do not write the address.。改法：落款只写 Li Ming，全信不出现真名与地址。
- 只喊口号不给措施 反面示例：Exercise is very important. Students should pay more attention to their health. 全是口号，没告诉校长具体怎么改。改法：To begin with, I would suggest that the university build more sports facilities, such as basketball courts, so that students have places to exercise. 给出可操作措施加细节。
- 命令或抱怨口气 反面示例：You must build a new gym right now, or students will keep getting weaker. 对校长下命令、带威胁，语域全错。改法：I would suggest that the university build a new gym, which would help students stay fit. 用委婉建议式。
- 同义重复凑字数 反面示例：Sports are good. Doing sports is good for students. Sports can make students healthy. 三句一个意思在注水。改法：保留一句主张，改用新细节展开，如 like a monthly running competition, to arouse students' interest。
常见问题
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