2023年6月·第2套英语六级写作 · 题目、范文与解析
本页是 2023年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作 的写作真题页(四六级短文写作)—— 与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,词数要求 150–200 词)连续排印 ,卷面下方直接给出参考范文(186 词)与整篇中译、逐段拆解,另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。
写作题和范文
本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2023年6月·第2套 英语六级写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,含主题、文体、词数与署名约束)连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题;卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。
【参考范文 · 186 词】写作无唯一标准答案,以下为达标示范
When faced with differing opinions, we should try to reach agreement through friendly discussion and reasonable argument. In a world where people come from diverse backgrounds, disagreements are inevitable; yet how we handle them reveals our maturity. Rather than shouting others down or stubbornly clinging to our own views, seeking common ground through calm reasoning is always the wiser choice.
The reason is simple: friendly discussion invites cooperation, while quarrels only deepen the divide. Take the famous debates in scientific communities. When Darwin proposed his theory of evolution, opponents raised sharp objections, but progress was made not by insults but by patient argument and shared evidence. Similarly, in my own study group, a heated dispute over a project was resolved only after we sat down, listened to one another, and combined our ideas. Mutual respect turned rivals into partners.
In conclusion, differing opinions need not lead to conflict. If we approach them with an open mind, sound logic, and genuine respect, we can transform disagreement into understanding and reach a consensus that benefits everyone. This is not only a skill but a mark of a civilized society.
【参考译文】
面对不同的意见时,我们应当努力通过友好的讨论和合理的论证来达成一致。在一个人们来自不同背景的世界里,分歧不可避免;然而我们如何处理分歧,恰恰显露出我们的成熟。与其压制他人或固执己见,不如通过冷静的说理去寻求共识,这永远是更明智的选择。
道理很简单:友好的讨论邀来合作,而争吵只会加深隔阂。以科学界那些著名的争论为例。当达尔文提出进化论时,反对者提出了尖锐的质疑,但真正推动进步的不是谩骂,而是耐心的论证与共享的证据。同样,在我自己的学习小组里,一场因项目而起的激烈争执,只有在我们坐下来、互相倾听、把彼此的想法结合起来之后才得以化解。相互尊重把对手变成了伙伴。
总而言之,不同的意见不必导致冲突。如果我们以开放的心态、严谨的逻辑和真诚的尊重去面对它们,就能把分歧转化为理解,达成惠及每个人的共识。这不仅是一种能力,更是一个文明社会的标志。
【第 1 段】照抄首句加背景态度双句。开头逐字照抄给定首句 When faced with differing opinions... reasonable argument.,随即用 In a world where people come from diverse backgrounds, disagreements are inevitable 补背景、用 Rather than shouting others down... is always the wiser choice 亮态度,落实第一段‘照抄首句并亮明立场’的功能。
【第 2 段】理由加达尔文例加小组亲历。先用 The reason is simple: friendly discussion invites cooperation, while quarrels only deepen the divide 给理由,再以 When Darwin proposed his theory of evolution... 上名人例,用 Similarly, in my own study group 接亲身经历,末句 Mutual respect turned rivals into partners 小结回扣中心,兑现‘论证+举例’的主体段功能。
【第 3 段】重申加条件句加点睛升华。以 In conclusion, differing opinions need not lead to conflict 重申,用 If we approach them with an open mind, sound logic, and genuine respect, we can transform disagreement into understanding 条件句复用首句关键词回扣,末句升华到 a mark of a civilized society,形成首尾闭环。
这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么
动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ,再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断,不是通用套路。
论证遇分歧应友好讨论理性求共识
本题要写的是:围绕给定首句 begins with the sentence 展开,论证面对不同意见时,应通过友好讨论与讲道理来达成一致。中心不是‘观点为什么会不同’,也不是‘如何坚持自己’,而是紧扣‘用友好讨论+理性论证去求得共识’这一态度。任务要求明确允许 make comments, cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay,即靠评论、举例、亲身经历把这个态度撑起来。
面向阅卷人的正式书面语
本题是纯议论短文,没有具体收信人,读者就是阅卷老师,因此用正式书面语即可,不需要称呼语、落款或口语化表达。语域上避免 gonna、a lot of 这类口语词,多用书面连接词与完整句式,让文章显得有分量。
友好讨论与讲理优于争吵与固执
全篇中心:面对分歧,与其争吵或固执己见,不如以友好讨论和理性论证寻求共识,这既高效又体现修养。这一句直接承接给定首句 When faced with differing opinions, we should try to reach agreement through friendly discussion and reasonable argument.,全文所有段落都为它服务。
- 讲理:友好讨论促合作争吵加深对立 第一个分论点讲道理:友好讨论邀请对方合作,而争吵只会加深隔阂、把分歧变成对立。这是回答‘为什么这样做更好’,对应任务里的 make comments。
- 举例:以科学论争或亲身经历佐证 第二个分论点用事例佐证:可援引科学界靠理性辩论而非谩骂推动进步的历史,或一段自己在小组讨论里靠倾听化解争执的经历,正好落实 cite examples or use your personal experiences。
怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架
按写作家族给出现成的段落框架(每段承担什么功能),并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架(留出填本题内容的空位)。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。
- 第 1 段 照抄首句并亮明立场 开头段:逐字照抄给定首句 begins with the sentence,再用两三句把它扩展成明确态度——分歧难免,但处理方式见修养,理性求共识优于争吵固执。
- 第 2 段 论证加举例的主体段 主体段:先讲道理(友好讨论促合作、争吵加深对立),再用一个名人事例+一段亲身经历佐证,落实 cite examples or use your personal experiences。
- 第 3 段 重申态度并升华收束 结尾段:回扣首句,重申以开放心态、理性逻辑与相互尊重把分歧转化为理解,升华到文明社会层面,形成结构闭环。
本段落点:抄下首句后,指出人来自不同背景、分歧不可避免,但处理方式反映成熟度;与其压制别人或固执己见,不如以冷静说理寻求共识。紧扣 reach agreement through friendly discussion and reasonable argument。
- 补背景句 In a world where __, __ are inevitable; yet how we handle them reveals our __.(填‘人来自不同背景’‘分歧’‘成熟/修养’)
- 亮态度取舍 Rather than __, __ is always the wiser choice.(前空填要否定的做法如争吵固执,后空填你主张的做法如冷静说理)
本段落点:理由是友好讨论邀请合作、争吵加深隔阂;名人例可用达尔文进化论遭遇尖锐反对却靠耐心论证与共享证据取得进步;亲身经历可写小组因项目起争执,坐下来互相倾听、整合想法后化解,让 Mutual respect turned rivals into partners,落实 cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay。
- 给理由 The reason is simple: __ invites cooperation, while __ only deepen the divide.(填‘友好讨论’与‘争吵’)
- 举例过渡 Take __. When __, __ was made not by insults but by __.(引出名人/历史事例并点出靠理性而非谩骂取胜)
- 接亲历并小结 Similarly, in my own __, __ was resolved only after we __.(用相似结构把个人经历接上并回扣中心)
本段落点:重申分歧无需酿成冲突,若以开放心态、严谨逻辑与真诚尊重相待,就能把分歧转化为理解、达成惠及各方的共识,并升华为文明社会的标志,回扣首句 reach agreement through friendly discussion and reasonable argument。
- 总结重申 In conclusion, __ need not lead to __.(填‘不同意见’与‘冲突’,呼应首句主题)
- 条件绑定升华 If we approach them with __, we can transform __ into __.(前空填开放心态/理性/尊重,后两空填分歧→理解)
本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分
按阅卷四维(内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式)给出本题达标要点,并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。
- 内容切题 紧扣友好讨论求共识不写成坚持己见 本题达标要点:全篇必须服务于 reach agreement through friendly discussion and reasonable argument;最易失分是跑去写分歧成因或如何固执己见,与核心态度背道而驰。
- 结构连贯 首尾呼应且例子有过渡不堆砌 本题达标要点:结尾用 In conclusion 与条件句回扣首句形成闭环;两个例子间用 Similarly 过渡,避免并列硬堆而无衔接。
- 语言准确 贴题词组用准且高级句型无错 本题达标要点:用好 differing opinions、reach a consensus、reasonable argument、mutual respect 等贴题词组;举例的过去时(Darwin proposed、was resolved)与主张的一般现在时不要混用。
- 字数格式 正文达标且首句照抄不计数 本题达标要点:给定首句须原样照抄且 not including the sentence given,因此正文要单独凑够 at least 150 words but no more than 200 words 的下限,切勿把首句算进去导致正文实际不足。
- 空喊应该友好讨论无据 反面示例:‘We should have friendly discussion. Friendly discussion is good. We should not quarrel. Quarrel is bad.’ 通篇重复口号、零论证。改为:‘Friendly discussion is better because it invites cooperation; when Darwin faced fierce objections, progress came from patient argument rather than insults.’ 用理由+事例把口号坐实。
- 误把首句算进导致正文缩水 反面示例:考生抄完 17 词的首句后只续写了约 135 词就收尾,自以为‘一百五十多词达标’。实则正文不足下限。修正:续写部分单独写满至少 150 词,首句只作篇首、不计入。
- 跑题去写观点为何不同 反面示例:主体段大篇幅分析‘人们观点为什么会不同——因为文化、教育、性格差异’,全然不提如何通过讨论求共识,偏离核心。修正:把落点从‘为何不同’转到‘遇到不同该如何友好讨论、理性论证以达成一致’。
常见问题
围绕本题的写作题目与要求、作文类型、立意要点、参考范文、谋篇分段与评分丢分,逐条给出可核对的答案。
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- 2023年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作(论证遇分歧应友好讨论理性求共识)这篇作文怎么分段、每段写什么?
- 2023年6月英语六级真题第2套 写作的参考范文共 3 段:第 1 段(照抄首句并亮明立场)开头段:逐字照抄给定首句 begins with the sentence,再用两三句把它扩展成明确态度——分歧难免,但处理方式见修养,理性求共识优于争吵固执;第 2 段(论证加举例的主体段)主体段:先讲道理(友好讨论促合作、争吵加深对立),再用一个名人事例+一段亲身经历佐证,落实 cite examples or use your personal experiences;第 3 段(重申态度并升华收束)结尾段:回扣首句,重申以开放心态、理性逻辑与相互尊重把分歧转化为理解,升华到文明社会层面,形成结构闭环。
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- 按内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式四维评分,本题达标要点:内容切题——本题达标要点:全篇必须服务于 reach agreement through friendly discussion and reasonable argument;最易失分是跑去写分歧成因或如何固执己见,与核心态度背道而驰;结构连贯——本题达标要点:结尾用 In conclusion 与条件句回扣首句形成闭环;两个例子间用 Similarly 过渡,避免并列硬堆而无衔接;语言准确——本题达标要点:用好 differing opinions、reach a consensus、reasonable argument、mutual respect 等贴题词组;举例的过去时(Darwin proposed、was resolved)与主张的一般现在时不要混用;字数格式——本题达标要点:给定首句须原样照抄且 not including the sentence given,因此正文要单独凑够 at least 150 words but no more than 200 words 的下限,切勿把首句算进去导致正文实际不足。 典型低分写法(须避免):反面示例:‘We should have friendly discussion. Friendly discussion is good. We should not quarrel. Quarrel is bad.’ 通篇重复口号、零论证。改为:‘Friendly discussion is better because it invites cooperation; when Darwin faced fierce objections, progress came from patient argument rather than insults.’ 用理由+事例把口号坐实;反面示例:考生抄完 17 词的首句后只续写了约 135 词就收尾,自以为‘一百五十多词达标’。实则正文不足下限。修正:续写部分单独写满至少 150 词,首句只作篇首、不计入;反面示例:主体段大篇幅分析‘人们观点为什么会不同——因为文化、教育、性格差异’,全然不提如何通过讨论求共识,偏离核心。修正:把落点从‘为何不同’转到‘遇到不同该如何友好讨论、理性论证以达成一致’。