2006年考研英语（2010 前）写作（小作文） · 题目、范文与解析
本页是 2006年考研英语（2010 前）真题 写作 的写作真题页（应用文小作文）—— 与试卷排版同一卷面：完整写作要求（Directions）连续排印 ，卷面下方直接给出参考范文（180 词）与整篇中译、逐段拆解，另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。
写作题和范文
本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2006年 考研英语（2010 前）写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面：完整写作要求（Directions，含主题、文体、词数与署名约束）连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题；卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。
You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
【参考范文 · 180 词】写作无唯一标准答案，以下为达标示范
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to seek your assistance in finding a child whom I would like to sponsor through Project Hope. As a beneficiary of education myself, I am eager to offer financial aid to a young learner in a remote area.
The child I hope to support should come from a poor family that cannot afford the cost of schooling, preferably from a mountainous or underdeveloped region. Above all, he or she should be diligent, do well in study and have a genuine desire to continue learning, so that my help can truly change a life.
As for my plan, I intend to send a fixed sum of money to the child at the beginning of every term to cover tuition and books. I will keep this support going until he or she finishes school, and I would also like to write letters regularly to follow the child's progress and offer encouragement.
I would be very grateful if you could help me find a suitable candidate. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Ming
【参考译文】
尊敬的先生或女士： 我写信是想请您协助我物色一名孩子，我希望通过希望工程资助他/她。我自己也曾受惠于教育，因此十分渴望为一名偏远地区的小学子提供经济上的帮助。 我希望资助的孩子应来自无力承担上学费用的贫困家庭，最好身处山区或欠发达地区。尤为重要的是，他或她应勤奋刻苦、学习成绩优良，并有继续求学的强烈愿望，这样我的帮助才能真正改变一个人的命运。 至于我的计划，我打算每学期开学时给这个孩子汇一笔固定的钱，用于支付学费和书本费。我会一直资助到他/她毕业，还愿意定期写信跟进孩子的进步、给予鼓励。 如蒙相助为我找到合适的人选，我将不胜感激。期待您的回复。 此致 李明
【第 1 段】开门见山亮意图。首段用 I am writing to seek your assistance in... 直接点明来意，再以 As a beneficiary of education myself, I am eager to offer financial aid 补出身份与资助意愿，落实了『称呼＋说明写信意图』这一功能，正对应句架『亮明写信目的』。
【第 2 段】分层写清孩子条件。第二段从家境（come from a poor family that cannot afford the cost of schooling）、地域（a mountainous or underdeveloped region）到品质（diligent, do well in study and have a genuine desire to continue learning）逐层限定，用 Above all... so that... 递进强调，答足了『想资助什么样的孩子』。
【第 3 段】把计划写成可操作步骤。第三段用 As for my plan, I intend to send a fixed sum of money... at the beginning of every term 给出金额与频率，keep this support going until... finishes school 给期限，write letters regularly 给跟进，把 how 答实、不空泛。
【第 4 段】致谢期待并规范落款。结尾用 I would be very grateful if you could... 礼貌致谢，I look forward to your reply 期待回复，落款只写 Li Ming、未署真名、也未写地址，卡住全部格式硬约束。
这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么
动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ，再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断，不是通用套路。
写求助信请部门代找受助儿童
本题核心任务一句话钉死：你想通过希望工程资助一名孩子——You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area——于是写信请对方帮你物色人选，并 specify what kind of child you want to help、how you will carry out your plan。所以全篇落点是『提出请求＋讲清条件与做法』，不是空谈希望工程的意义。
以捐助人身份写给相关部门，正式礼貌
读者是希望工程 the department concerned，你是主动捐助的陌生人，双方无私交，语域要正式客气：称呼用 Dear Sir or Madam，结尾用 Yours faithfully，语气是『恳请协助』。署名按硬性要求——Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter，只落款 Li Ming；另外 Do not write the address。
恳请部门代找一名可长期资助的贫困学童
本信交际目的：向希望工程相关部门表明资助意愿，恳请其帮忙 help find a candidate，并把 what kind of child you want to help 与 how you will carry out your plan 交代清楚，让对方能据此精准匹配人选。
- 开篇点明资助意愿与请求 第一个内容点是表明来意：说明你 You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area，并请对方协助找人。这是增补的开场点，让读者一眼知道你为何写信。
- 受助对象的条件（偏远＋贫困＋好学） 第二个内容点回答 what kind of child you want to help：来自偏远山区、家庭贫困上不起学，且勤奋刻苦、成绩优良、有强烈的求学意愿。条件写得越具体，部门越好匹配。
- 资助计划的落实（汇款＋跟进） 第三个内容点回答 how you will carry out your plan：每学期定期汇一笔钱支付学费书本费，长期供到毕业，并通过书信跟进、鼓励孩子。给出金额、频率、期限才叫『可操作』。
怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架
按写作家族给出现成的段落框架（每段承担什么功能），并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架（留出填本题内容的空位）。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。
- 第 1 段 称呼＋说明写信意图 顶格写 Dear Sir or Madam，紧接一句表明来意：想通过希望工程资助偏远地区孩子，恳请部门帮忙 asking them to help find a candidate。
- 第 2 段 说明想资助的孩子类型 单独成段回答 what kind of child you want to help，从家境、地域、品质三层写清条件。
- 第 3 段 说明资助计划 单独成段回答 how you will carry out your plan，给出汇款方式、期限与跟进做法。
- 第 4 段 礼貌收尾＋落款 Li Ming 致谢并表达期待回复，结尾遵守 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter，只署 Li Ming。
本段落到：你想 offering financial aid to a child in a remote area，现写信请部门 help find a candidate，可再加一句自己的资助意愿或身份感染读者。
- 亮明写信目的 I am writing to seek your assistance in ＿＿（doing sth）.
- 补充身份与意愿 As ＿＿, I am eager to ＿＿.
本段把 what kind of child you want to help 落成具体条件：来自贫困家庭、偏远地区，且刻苦好学、有继续读书的强烈愿望。
- 限定对象条件 The child I hope to support should ＿＿, preferably ＿＿.
- 递进强调关键条件 Above all, he or she should ＿＿, so that ＿＿.
本段把 how you will carry out your plan 写实：每学期汇款支付学费书本，长期资助到孩子毕业，并定期通信了解进展、给予鼓励。
- 说明具体做法 As for my plan, I intend to ＿＿ every ＿＿ to cover ＿＿.
- 承诺持续与跟进 I will keep ＿＿ until ＿＿, and I would also like to ＿＿.
本段礼貌感谢部门协助、期待尽快回复，结尾遵守 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter，只署 Li Ming，且 Do not write the address。
- 礼貌提出请求或致谢 I would be very grateful if you could ＿＿.
- 期待回复收尾 I look forward to ＿＿.
本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分
按阅卷四维（内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式）给出本题达标要点，并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。
- 内容切题 两个要点＋一个请求全部落地 本题 what kind of child you want to help 与 how you will carry out your plan 都须成段写到，且明确提出 asking them to help find a candidate，切忌跑去空谈希望工程的意义。
- 结构连贯 四块分明、两要点各自成段 本题两个要点务必各占一段，别挤在一段里；段首用 As for my plan 之类明确切换话题，读者一眼看清哪段答哪问。
- 语言准确 书信礼貌句式与指代用准 本题多用 would like to、would be grateful if you could 这类客气句；指代性别不明的孩子用 he or she，别写成 they is 之类不一致的错句。
- 字数格式 过下限、只署 Li Ming、不写地址 须满足 in no less than 100 words，并遵守 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter 与 Do not write the address，署名只写 Li Ming。
- 只说想帮谁却没说怎么资助 反面示例：通篇只写 I want to help a poor child in a remote area and I hope you can find one for me.，完全没提汇款、期限、跟进，how 这一块整体缺失。改法：单独加一段写清『每学期汇一笔钱、供到毕业、写信鼓励』，把资助计划补全。
- 结尾签了真名或漏写 Li Ming 反面示例：结尾写成 Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei（签了真名）。改法：无论如何只落款 Li Ming，并且不写地址，卡住这条硬约束。
- 大谈希望工程意义、无具体请求 反面示例：Project Hope is a great cause that helps many poor children and benefits our society a lot. 这是议论、没有诉求。改法：改成 I am writing to ask you to help me find a child I can sponsor. 直接提出请求。
- 条件计划全是套话凑字 反面示例：I will try my best to help the child and give him whatever he needs. 空洞且注水。改法：I will send 500 yuan each term to cover his tuition and books until he finishes middle school.，用具体数字把计划写实。
常见问题
围绕本题的写作题目与要求、作文类型、立意要点、参考范文、谋篇分段与评分丢分，逐条给出可核对的答案。
- 2006年考研英语（2010 前）真题 写作的写作题目是什么？要求写多少字？
- 2006年考研英语（2010 前）真题 写作（Section III Part A）的写作要求为：You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan. Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points) 作为应用文，正文须按规定落款、不得署本人真实姓名。
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- 2006年考研英语（2010 前）真题 写作的中心立意是本信交际目的：向希望工程相关部门表明资助意愿，恳请其帮忙 help find a candidate，并把 what kind of child you want to help 与 how you will carry out your plan 交代清楚，让对方能据此精准匹配人选。可展开的要点：第一个内容点是表明来意：说明你 You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area，并请对方协助找人。这是增补的开场点，让读者一眼知道你为何写信；第二个内容点回答 what kind of child you want to help：来自偏远山区、家庭贫困上不起学，且勤奋刻苦、成绩优良、有强烈的求学意愿。条件写得越具体，部门越好匹配；第三个内容点回答 how you will carry out your plan：每学期定期汇一笔钱支付学费书本费，长期供到毕业，并通过书信跟进、鼓励孩子。给出金额、频率、期限才叫『可操作』。
- 2006年考研英语（2010 前）真题 写作（写求助信请部门代找受助儿童）的参考范文是怎样的？多少词？
- 2006年考研英语（2010 前）真题 写作的参考范文（180 词）：Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to seek your assistance in finding a child whom I would like to sponsor through Project Hope. As a beneficiary of education myself, I am eager to offer financial aid to a young learner in a remote area. The child I hope to support should come from a poor family that cannot afford the cost of schooling, preferably from a mountainous or underdeveloped region. Above all, he or she should be diligent, do well in study and have a genuine desire to continue learning, so that my help can truly change a life. As for my plan, I intend to send a fixed sum of money to the child at the beginning of every term to cover tuition and books. I will keep this support going until he or she finishes school, and I would also like to write letters regularly to follow the child's progress and offer encouragement. I would be very grateful if you could help me find a suitable candidate. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Ming
- 2006年考研英语（2010 前）真题 写作（写求助信请部门代找受助儿童）这篇作文怎么分段、每段写什么？
- 2006年考研英语（2010 前）真题 写作的参考范文共 4 段：第 1 段（称呼＋说明写信意图）顶格写 Dear Sir or Madam，紧接一句表明来意：想通过希望工程资助偏远地区孩子，恳请部门帮忙 asking them to help find a candidate；第 2 段（说明想资助的孩子类型）单独成段回答 what kind of child you want to help，从家境、地域、品质三层写清条件；第 3 段（说明资助计划）单独成段回答 how you will carry out your plan，给出汇款方式、期限与跟进做法；第 4 段（礼貌收尾＋落款 Li Ming）致谢并表达期待回复，结尾遵守 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter，只署 Li Ming。
- 2006年考研英语（2010 前）真题 写作（写求助信请部门代找受助儿童）作文容易在哪丢分？
- 按内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式四维评分，本题达标要点：内容切题——本题 what kind of child you want to help 与 how you will carry out your plan 都须成段写到，且明确提出 asking them to help find a candidate，切忌跑去空谈希望工程的意义；结构连贯——本题两个要点务必各占一段，别挤在一段里；段首用 As for my plan 之类明确切换话题，读者一眼看清哪段答哪问；语言准确——本题多用 would like to、would be grateful if you could 这类客气句；指代性别不明的孩子用 he or she，别写成 they is 之类不一致的错句；字数格式——须满足 in no less than 100 words，并遵守 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter 与 Do not write the address，署名只写 Li Ming。 典型低分写法（须避免）：反面示例：通篇只写 I want to help a poor child in a remote area and I hope you can find one for me.，完全没提汇款、期限、跟进，how 这一块整体缺失。改法：单独加一段写清『每学期汇一笔钱、供到毕业、写信鼓励』，把资助计划补全；反面示例：结尾写成 Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei（签了真名）。改法：无论如何只落款 Li Ming，并且不写地址，卡住这条硬约束；反面示例：Project Hope is a great cause that helps many poor children and benefits our society a lot. 这是议论、没有诉求。改法：改成 I am writing to ask you to help me find a child I can sponsor. 直接提出请求；反面示例：I will try my best to help the child and give him whatever he needs. 空洞且注水。改法：I will send 500 yuan each term to cover his tuition and books until he finishes middle school.，用具体数字把计划写实。