2010年考研英语二写作(小作文) · 题目、范文与解析
本页是 2010年考研英语二真题 写作 的写作真题页(应用文小作文)—— 与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,词数要求 约 100 词、不署真名)连续排印 ,卷面下方直接给出参考范文(101 词)与整篇中译、逐段拆解,另附审题立意、谋篇句架与评分自检 。
写作题和范文
本页写作题面、参考范文与逐段解析由懒笔记基于2010年 考研英语二写作原卷整理。与试卷排版同一卷面:完整写作要求(Directions,含主题、文体、词数与署名约束)连续排印。写作是生产性任务、无 ABCD 标准答案——题面即整道题;卷面下方直接给出满足全部硬约束的参考范文、整篇中译与逐段拆解。
You have just come back from the U.S. as a member of a Sino-American cultural exchange program.
Write a letter to your American colleague to
1) express your thanks for his/her warm reception;
2) welcome him/her to visit China in due course.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.
Do not write your address.(10 points)
【参考范文 · 101 词】写作无唯一标准答案,以下为达标示范
Dear John,
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the warm reception you gave me during my recent visit to the United States as a member of the Sino-American cultural exchange program. Your thoughtful arrangements, from the guided tour of your city to those delightful family dinners, made my stay both comfortable and memorable.
Now that I am back home, I would like to invite you to visit China in due course. It would be my great pleasure to show you our ancient sites and modern cities. Please come whenever it is convenient for you.
Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
【参考译文】
亲爱的约翰:
我写这封信是想表达我对你在我以中美文化交流项目成员身份近期访美期间给予的热情接待的衷心感谢。你周到的安排——从带我游览你所在的城市,到那几顿愉快的家宴——让我的逗留既舒适又难忘。
如今我已回国,我想邀请你在适当的时候来中国访问。若能带你看看我们的名胜古迹与现代都市,将是我莫大的荣幸。你方便的时候随时欢迎前来。
此致 张伟
【第 1 段】称呼得体。以 Dear John 顶格开头,落实第一段'定称呼'方法,对相识同事既亲切又礼貌。
【第 2 段】谢有细节。先用 I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude 总说感谢,再用 from the guided tour of your city to those delightful family dinners 补具体细节,落实'先总谢后举例',感谢不空泛;回顾用过去时。
【第 3 段】邀请热情。用 I would like to invite you to visit China in due course 发出邀请,再以 show you our ancient sites and modern cities 描绘看点,末句 whenever it is convenient 表诚意,落实'邀请+描愿景',且用将来时。
【第 4 段】落款合规。以 Yours sincerely 收尾、落款 Zhang Wei,落实'客套+规定落款',未写真名与地址,守住硬约束。
这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么
动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域 ,再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断,不是通用套路。
感谢+回访邀请
本题是一封信,明确规定两件必须写到的事:express your thanks for his/her warm reception 感谢对方的热情接待;welcome him/her to visit China in due course 邀请对方日后来中国访问。两点都要写,缺一即要点不全。
写给美国同事的私人信
收信人是 your American colleague,你们刚在 Sino-American cultural exchange program 里共事过,是相识的同事关系。因此语气应友好、真诚、略偏正式而不生硬——用 Dear+名字开头、Yours sincerely 结尾,既得体又不失亲切。
谢款待、邀回访
本信的交际目的:为对方在美国给予的 warm reception 郑重道谢,并顺势发出诚挚邀请,请对方 visit China in due course 实现互访。
- 具体致谢 紧扣 express your thanks for his/her warm reception,先总说感谢,再点出接待中令你印象深刻的细节(如陪同参观、家宴款待),让感谢有落点而不空泛。
- 发出回访邀请 紧扣 welcome him/her to visit China in due course,热情邀请对方来华,并勾勒来华可期待的内容(如带对方看名胜古迹与现代都市),最后给一句'方便时随时来'表诚意。
怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架
按写作家族给出现成的段落框架(每段承担什么功能),并为每段配可直接套用的 功能句架(留出填本题内容的空位)。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。
- 第 1 段 称呼 顶格写 Dear+对方名字,点明这是写给美国同事的私人信。
- 第 2 段 致谢段 表达对 warm reception 的感谢,并回顾接待中的具体细节。
- 第 3 段 邀请段 发出 visit China in due course 的回访邀请,勾勒来华看点并给出便利承诺。
- 第 4 段 结尾落款 写客套语 Yours sincerely,并按规定落款 Zhang Wei,不写真名与地址。
写给 your American colleague,用一个具体英文名如 Dear John 顶格开头。
- 书信称呼 Dear ___,(横线填对方名字,顶格独立成行)
总说感谢对方在美期间给予的 warm reception,再具体点出令你难忘的接待细节,如陪同游览城市、安排家宴,说明这些让你的逗留舒适而难忘。
- 表达感谢 I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for ___.(横线填感谢的事)
- 具体化款待 Your ___, from ___ to ___, made my stay ___.(前空填对方的安排,后空填感受)
紧扣 welcome him/her to visit China in due course 发出回访邀请,勾画来华可看名胜古迹与现代都市,末句表示对方 in due course 方便时随时欢迎。
- 发出邀请 I would like to invite you to visit ___ in due course.(横线填地点)
- 描绘期待 It would be my great pleasure to show you ___.(横线填可看的内容)
- 给对方便利 Please come whenever it is convenient for you.
写 Yours sincerely 后落款 Zhang Wei;严格遵守 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. 与 Do not write your address.。
- 结尾客套 Yours sincerely,(独立成行)
- 落款 (另起一行写规定的署名,不写真名与地址)
本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分
按阅卷四维(内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 / 字数格式)给出本题达标要点,并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 —— 这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。
- 内容切题 两点都要到 确认 express your thanks for his/her warm reception 与 welcome him/her to visit China in due course 都已落笔,最易漏掉第二点邀请而只写感谢。
- 结构连贯 一点一段不混写 感谢与邀请各自成段,别把两件事塞进一段搅成一团;结尾 Yours sincerely 与落款要独立成行。
- 语言准确 谢用过去邀用将来 回顾接待写 the reception you gave me(过去),邀请写 I would like to invite you(将来意愿),并善用题面现成的 in due course 等地道表达。
- 字数格式 守约100词与署名禁令 篇幅贴近 about 100 words 即可;务必遵守 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. 与 Do not write your address.,只落款 Zhang Wei。
- 只谢不邀 反面:整封信只写 Thank you for your warm reception... I really enjoyed my stay,通篇感谢却只字未提邀请对方来华,直接漏掉任务点 2,要点分大扣。修正:结尾另起一段写 I would like to invite you to visit China in due course,把邀请补齐。
- 空喊感谢 反面:Thank you very much for everything. You are so kind and I am very very happy. 全是空泛客套、无一处具体。修正:Your thoughtful arrangements, such as the guided tour and the family dinners, made my stay truly memorable. 用具体安排支撑感谢。
- 署真名或写地址 反面:结尾写成 Yours sincerely, Li Ming / 并附上 No. 5, Renmin Road...,违反明确禁令。修正:只写 Yours sincerely, 换行落款 Zhang Wei,不出现任何真实姓名与地址。
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